| "Destinys Call" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: detinys call
Reviewed By: mobie On: May 07, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good story so i want another chapter up dated!
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Reviewed By: Dynamo_ace [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
It was looking so good... untill you ruined it with a hentai scene, no offence but it could have been left out.
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Reviewed By: a On: February 15, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ryu and kasumi fic! And when are you going to udate the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Master47 On: July 10, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice pairing. Please update soon. Why the "R" rating though?
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Title: daveyboy
Reviewed By: linggy On: December 23, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic!!!! I luved it, my fav character is kasumi(female) and Ryu (male) so i luv the combination. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MM On: June 22, 2003 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was such an awesome chapter. You have got a lot of skill and the potential to write even more wonderfully. Keep up the excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Skye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey cool fic please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Aeris On: April 20, 2003 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your fic. I'm dying to know what would happen next. So please continue!!! Kasumi and Ryu forever!!! |
Reviewed By: Aeris On: April 20, 2003 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your fic. I'm dying to know what would happen next. So please continue!!! Kasumi and Ryu forever!!! |
Reviewed By: Fudgieangel On: April 01, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story! Very descriptive, and I haven't read a good Kasumi and Hayabusa fic in a long time. Keep up the good work, ne? |
Reviewed By: KOS MOS 423 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like ur story keep it up!!!! An i hope u write a Ayane/Hayate fic also!!! |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LIKE IT!! BUT I WOULD'VE PERFERED A AYANE/HAYATE FIC(MY TWO MOST FAV DOACHARACTERS) OR CHRISTIE FANFIC ABOUT HER ASSAINATIONS, I DONT KNOW! BUT I REALLY LIK IT KEEP IT UP! BY THE WAY THAT AYANE ONE-SHOT FANFICS IS ALSO REALLY GOOD! |
