| "Bitter Harvest" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfecto!! I really liked it. I think it would be really cool if you did a part 'b' to this story, showing what went on downstairs with Bulma and Vegeta...
Ahhh.....that would be too cool! Anyways, hope to see you update soon, cause this story is so good! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfecto!! I really liked it. I think it would be really cool if you did a part 'b' to this story, showing what went on downstairs with Bulma and Vegeta...
Ahhh.....that would be too cool! Anyways, hope to see you update soon, cause this story is so good! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfecto!! I really liked it. I think it would be really cool if you did a part 'b' to this story, showing what went on downstairs with Bulma and Vegeta...
Ahhh.....that would be too cool! Anyways, hope to see you update soon, cause this story is so good! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
MANNNNNNN! BADDD!!! But I love the chapy!!!!!
Please Give us the Trunks cheery breaking moment!!! LEMON LEMON!
Anyways update soon!!!
Later! oh yes if u can manage a B/V lemon it would be apreciated! |
Reviewed By: Evil_blue_crayon@yahoo.com On: February 28, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon. Your actually one of the few that can write good ones anymore. The only thing that I found wrong was the use of ass. But you shouldn't pay attention to me though. I have always preferred the word backside or bottom than ass when writing, but that's probably just me...
That and leaving us wanting more! Please update with another glorious chapter. I really like your writing style. |
Reviewed By: Sk8erboi On: February 28, 2003 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update, hope to see you post again soon... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: February 28, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! You updated! You just made my day!! |
Reviewed By: loulou On: February 28, 2003 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad your continueing this! Can't wait to see more |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 28, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect-to-mondo!!!
...........
If that's even a word...
Oh well, in short; Great chapters! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well well well u have outdone urself it was a great Lemon ! *THANKGGGGGGGGGGOOODDDD |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well well well u have outdone urself it was a great Lemon ! *THANKGGGGGGGGGGOOODDDD |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 25, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! I can't wait to see more! This is an amazing start. I think I'm going to add you to my favorites... |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it Damn it! U have dont it again this is like a teaser and I love it!! Damn u!! *AHEMMM!!* Sorryy !! U know who it is so why bother right! Anyways Keep it coming I like it a lot cant wait for next chappy!
And hey before I forget when is the next lemon going to be / YEAH GIVE US THE LEEMONN! *SHUT UP*
Make me !! *I WILLLLLL! AAHHHHHHH*
hahahahah scraching my head
Later! |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 25, 2003 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you writing again. I can't wait to see where this story leads to... |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 13, 2003 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
My appologies if it sounded a tad pushy, girl! But hey, I'm an aussie chick and I can't help it!! LOL!!! |
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