| "Bitter Harvest" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 01, 2003 02:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope you get to update this soon. |
Reviewed By: WeaverOfDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 07:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
s'ok ButterflyV i tend to be that way too. I have only two more updates and then you can stick a fork in this story. I'll post them this week, no doubt. ~ * Sleep , Perchance to Dream, Weaver of Dreams *~ |
Reviewed By: WeaverOfDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 06:29 CST
Comment/Review:
The Answers You Seek and No cure are the new chapters, butterflyV but there will be another one come monday, promise. Thanks to all that have reviewed including NSBVEGETA , Evil Blue Crayon and Loulou. the rest of you too. you're words and thoughts about my writing mean alot to me and help me continue on with my stories. TY so much. ;) ~* Sleep , Perchance to Dream, Weaver of Dreams *~ |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 01, 2003 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Gonna update this?! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: March 31, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I loved this two chapys! The lemon was so sweet and very well written as always u never disapoint me. The fighting scens were good u write them better than me I suck at that!.
Well I cant wait for next instalment
Later! Oh yeah a C/T lemon wouldnt hurt me
And I want lil bra to wake up already shes so cute! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words for you,,,,KICK ASS....thats what this fic is! It totally kicks some serious butt! Add another chapter soon...
ALSO...the lemons in this fic are...wow amazingly amazing! You outdo yourself at every turn!
Great job! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 On: March 17, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes that was a very evil cliffy. I was just about to go off line when I decided to check MM.org to see if anything good got posted. And low and behold I saw your fic. :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY the clifffy!!! U are so bad!!!! But this is getting good Oh Please Bra is so cute I hope nothing happens to her or Vegeta will go AWOL!
The B/V brushing her hair was so sweet I loved that !
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOONNNN!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 On: March 15, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! You did the Bulma Vegeta living room lemon! I'm glad that you did. Nice writing. It's kinda sad that Trunks gotta fight the girl though. |
Reviewed By: Kandy_2002 On: March 14, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written, and leaving us once again waiting for more. |
Reviewed By: evil_blue_crayon@yahoo.com On: March 14, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter explained alot. You did a quick update without the chapter seeming rushed or sloppy, I really like that. I can't wait to see more of your work... |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was ... i meannnn NSBVEGETA faints.
*Hehehehehe Hi I have to say UU FUCKING ROCK Love the Lemon OH YEAH VEGETA BE MY STRIPPER TOO BABY MMMMMM!!! GODDAMN I NEED A DRINK ! , That was hot girl U have outdone yourself this time LOVED THE FUCKIN LEMONNN !! *
* BUT the shit as reaaly hit the fan , I mean FUCK this sucks Poor Trunks ! I dont like this shit!!*
More dancing Vegeta , Please dance , More
*Shit she's coming to Well Good chapys Loved them all AGAIN U ROCK!! WE R NOT WORTHY *
*Later! UPDATE SOOONN! >:D* |
Reviewed By: Sk8erbio On: March 12, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, Trunks is finally a man. Nice chap. |
Reviewed By: Evil_Blue_Crayon On: March 12, 2003 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a wonderful job on this chapter. I also like the suggestion that loulou made about a second (or will this be the third?) part, showing what happened between Vegeta and Bulma. I thought that was funny how Vegeta came down the steps annoyed. He was probably thinking:
"Where the hell is that woman?", seeming as he was still very much in his heat. And thanks for dedication of the story, that was very nice of you :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say you fucking rule I love your writting loved the Lemon! You Rock!! .
Trunks is finally a man What a man what might good man YUMMM! *envy towards red GRR!*
But hey I can always have the father right! ;D
Update soon and I totaly agree with the person above me sience my hunk is on heat mmmm Im intrigued I wanna know what went down below .Do I hear another B/V lemon I'd like to think so!
Cant wait for next chapy!
Later ! |
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