| "Rock Candy" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Toudou Higiri On: February 26, 2003 07:58 CST
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It should've been the other way around. Brad fucking Schu |
Reviewed By: Omittchi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 07:24 CST
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Ano... I don't write lemon scenes better than you, pyrochan. I just read so many they get stuck up in there. *taps head* So then... if I do manage to find a white suit (which I still haven't given up on) I shouldn't bring my rock candy to the con. *nods in understanding* Ooh! *giggles* I have Brad flavored rock candy. ^^
Thanks Bai Mei!I know it ended up as one long block of text but I really didn't want to try and seperate the scene. I guess when I do a rewrite for my site I'll fix that problem and I'll keep that in mind next time I write a B/S or anyone else type lemon. ^^; |
Reviewed By: Bai Mei On: February 26, 2003 05:39 CST
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I must say, I like to see the couple switch off from time to time and it's so rare! Though the fic could use a little better formatting (ended up as mostly one large block of text), it was a fun read. The undertoned message of Brad allowing Schu to be seme is pretty sweet. So you did do it right, no fear, sweetie. |
Reviewed By: Pyrochan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 21:37 CST
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*snickers* if I could draw, then Brad sucking on a piece of rock candy would've inspired a fanart.
You write better lemons than me, and yes, I know I already told you that. ^^ Was a very well-written PWP. *huggles* BxS and SxB is all good, as long as one is screwing the other, Pyrochan is very content. ^__^
Oh, and might I add that I won't be able to look at rock candy again without remembering this fic. ^^;; Mm...rock candy... |
Reviewed By: Omittchi On: February 25, 2003 21:07 CST
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come on people. Review! Please? I'll give you a cookie. Even if you wanna say it sucked or I'm dumb or whatever just review! |
