| "The Forsworn" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: pris On: April 02, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AAAHHH!! Update sooon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sprah On: April 02, 2004 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nononononononoo! please don't be the end... sigh realizes the date on the work...sniff... will you find it your hear to continue
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Reviewed By: Kris On: April 19, 2003 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe I could enjoy this story more. And I must admit that I love your writing as well. Wonderful imagery and even symbolism (like the song playing while no one was listening, yet the lyrics were remembered.)
One point that I thought was incredibly interesting about your story is the fact that everyone has a mask.
Poor Duo. On the eighth chapter, could you make it in Duo's point of view? I would like to see how he is reacting to everything that they are trying to ask him, and why he won't answer Heero. Especially since he gave Heero the first real answer to any of the questions. What made him stop?
Gah.
Please keep writing!
-Kris |
Reviewed By: Shamaria On: April 16, 2003 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sad,...but really good, please please write more |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 15, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was awesome. I'm enjoying your writing style -- the switching viewpoints and your dark, stylistic approach blend very nicely. I hope you keep on working on this fic...it's really quite good. |
Reviewed By: Bratcat On: April 10, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your update. Great going so far. Please continue the story. I'll keep checking on the story. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love the way you ended chapter 6. It was kinda neat seeing Quat's POV for a change, although I enjoyed the alternating Heero and Duo POVs.
I thought Heero's reaction to seeing a shell of Duo was nicely done.
I almost fell off the chair when Duo responded to Heero - that's a good thing, by the way! |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God. Don't just stand there, help out! At least Quat is trying to help. Is there hope? |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 22, 2003 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intense and great writing. Oh poor Duo. Will he be brought back. Please let him be saved. Will be watching for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 08, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Absolutely great please finish this story. I cant wait to see Heero rescue Duo. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 02:19 CST
Comment/Review:
ahh...there's more! I was so sure you were just gonna kill him off, but nO! He's alive! MORE MORE MORE! I'm really enjoying this..g.reat mix and angst and dark...and heero is so stupid! lol |
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! u can't leave it there! U have 2 continue this soon! |
