| "One Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic. You created a believable world and plopped two well-known characters in it. Beautiful job of painting a universe with a few short lines of description and a hearty dose of context. Very descriptive - 10s all around!!
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Title: one thing
Reviewed By: shadow runner On: June 29, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic it has helped me a lot in seeing myself and i would like it if you wrote another one you are a great writer and this story is not all fluff like a lot of the others and i rely liked this story thanks and please don't stop wrighting you are very good at it.
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Title: realistic
Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing and realistic fic. Even though there are elements of fantasy within, even those are tactile, and imaginative, and solid enough to bring images and feelings, tastes and smells, to the mind. Your way of spinning sentences and plot is intricate and obsorbing. I loved reading this fic. It sucked me in, and I didn't feel as if I were reading, it felt as if I were living. Even though there wasn't the traditional happy ending, there was resolution, and a contentedness that was believable, and kept true to the plot and characters and situation you created. I cannot say it enough, I Love this fic. Please keep writing. Continue your efforts and I hope to someday see your works published ( even if I won't know it's you ).
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Title: StarHosi
Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thats all I can say this is one of the best writen storys I have ever read. I love how this was writen I was rivited I couldn't stop reading it. It's one of only about 3 or 4 storys I have ever read that has done that. Please keep up the wonderful work.Makes me wish they would let me put more that 10 for the ratings.
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Reviewed By: Alex Yoshizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 19:43 CST
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My favorite part of this story is how you describe Daisuke. "Cute but not beautiful" makes it so much more interesting, and I can just see his skinny pale limbs (and cold hands! I loved the cold hands!) underneath all that punk gear. It always bothers me when an author writes the characters as phenomenally gorgeous, and I think you've done a great job in going beyond that. |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 05, 2003 20:27 CST
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That... was excellent. Beautiful story. Daisuke's charrie reminds me of my best friend, he acts a lot like him. ^_^ Another one I've loved! Keep writing, I eat and breathe your fics! *stalker grin* Bai! |
Reviewed By: syenite On: February 27, 2003 20:50 CST
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good thing i decided to investigate what hotaru-chan666 was talking about at ff.net mmmmmmm lemon daiken ~_~ i am so thoroughly confused by what dai means, but i'll let it go since my brain is kinda dead at the moment anyway. |
Reviewed By: Tanj On: February 27, 2003 05:39 CST
Comment/Review:
*hugs*
i love random stories.. This is beautiful.. (i did notice on ff.net the sex was missing.. stupid ff.net and their stupid rules..)
but i digress.
stunning work as usual
lovest tanj
(begs alongside Ice' for more chapters) |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking excellent! I loved it. Were you planning more? (I think it's fine as it is, though.) Leaving the ending open was the right choice. If there isn't any more to this fic, would you mind terribly working on updating Oasis or BodyHeat? Or even A Difference of Sides.... PLEASE!!!!! *gets down on knees and begs* |
