| "Hollow" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Milante On: August 24, 2003 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good piece. The story is not rushed at all, but is timed well. Great Job, and PLEASE finish it. |
Reviewed By: Animefan2017 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 03:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
For a person who hasn't really been watching Evangelion for a while, this appears to be like a work of a person who has recently seen the series. I could hardly tell that you haven't seen the series in a while.
It was very dramatic, the way I like it! It would be nice if you would update soon since I believe this is getting real good. I certainly believe that fanfiction posted on mediaminer.org(except NC-17) are better than those on fanfiction.net, with this being one of it. I've been reading fanfics on fanfiction.net and I must say, I'm disappointed with what has been written and uploaded. I'm glad I found this, please continue.
Animefan2017 |
Reviewed By: harvman85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an enjoyable fic, but the whole Asuka tries to kill herself and shinji brings her out of her depression and they fall in love with each other has been done to death. you will have to do something pretty spectacular to make this fic original. But it is a good fic and i am interested to see where it ends up. |
Reviewed By: Asuka Soryu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
that's super good, please write more for the love of god. |
