| "Real World Kenshin" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: The Wyrd Sister [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 17:20 CST
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This is great! I was a school when I started reading this and I had to print it out b/c I wasn't about to stop readin! Chocolate chip cookies for all!! *hands the cookies out*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 08:45 CST
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I LOVE REAL WORLD KENSHIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: TwilightStar
Reviewed By: TwilightStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 15:23 CST
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Konnnichiwa ^-^!!!!! yes yes its me again..u ppl r probabally tried of me writing so many times...oh well thats just me ^_^ ooooooo hhheeeeeyyy just wondering but where is misao in all this??? shes my favorite char.....and y does she have to come off as so....like she doesnt have a care in the world..like her life is so perfect...and i hate that....ok hate might be to strong of a word but still...kaoru has a dark past so does sano and megumi and everybody else but what about misao??!!!!!!!! this isnt fair shes barely even in this fic. although over all i really liked ur fic ^_^ ~*~Hakumei~*~
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Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story has me thinking about Kenshin 24/7! I cannot stop thinking about him and Sano. And I can't wait to see more of this fic. BTW, I totally support KxKxS. It'd be totally awesome to see. Something out of the norm would be just what Rurouni Kenshin needs. And Misao is a little annoying. Not too annoying but I know she'd get me a little mad if I was on the ship. Anyway, keep up the great work! -Mika Ranso (tsurugianime@aol.com)
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Reviewed By: TwilightStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 00:21 CDT
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Hi id write more but i just realized i my english paper was due tommorrow T.T wwwaaa its not fair!! T.T I still love ur fanfic but kaoru is a bit...too pure...i guess i am too but...shes just too perfect...come on everybody has a bad side, but hey i still like it! ^-^ update soon ^-^ ~*~Twilight~*~ aka ~*~Hakumei~*~
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Reviewed By: Alto-chan (again) On: October 01, 2003 23:12 CDT
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NEEEEE! I stick by my last review on everyting, except that....YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! ::sob:: I HAVE to see how this ends! please, Please, PLEEEAAAASE UPDAAATE!!! If you do, I'll love you forever! And watch out for you paragraphs, they're formatted as one huge thing. But I STILL LOVE IT! CONTINUE OR I'LL GO CRAZY!!!
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Reviewed By: SSK On: September 05, 2003 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on, this is begging for a KxKxS shot. It's screaming for a threesome. As in standing on a rooftop. |
Reviewed By: lillithan On: August 22, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I can find no wrong in this fic! Everyone is a bit ooc but their still in character? I'm so glad you updated, I sumbled across this fic quite some time ago, and fell in love with it from the first sentence. I hope you can find time to update this a bit, well lets see....sooner. But I understand. ^^
Anyway another great chapter! Can't wait to see what's next!
Lil |
Reviewed By: Alto-chan On: July 09, 2003 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHAMOLY!
I must say, this is an excellent piece of writing and I'm REALLY enthralled in it!
Sometimes I'll be too astounded by the drama to speak, other times I'm laughing my ass off! ^___^
This is a GREAT story with deep characters that keep me asking for more! A wonderful twist on the Kenshin characters! PLEASE PLASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!! I REEEAAALLY WANNA SEE THE REST! |
Reviewed By: To HeLl WiT ThE NiCkS On: July 01, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya!!! i really like this!!! but i think you should put more battousai in it!!! is kenshin still going go wit sano too??? or does he love karou? i think kenshin's a bit of a pimp! lol!! and no shit aoshi is actually talking!! what a loop! update soon!!! PLEASE?????????????? seeya laters |
Reviewed By: Maeven On: March 06, 2003 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is such a incredible take on the whole Kenshin cast. An affeminate Kenshin kinda disturbs me, but I can see it and it works very well with the story. I love what you've done with their backgrounds (especially Kaoru, I can't wait to read it). I really hope that you consider at least one threesome (KenshinxKaoruxSano). I'm usually not one to be interested in this sort of relationship, but with your writing ability I believe you can pull it off tastefully, considering how you've presented the characters. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. On a side-note, you might consider toning down Misao's character, she is a bit annoying and it would be difficult to see her with Yahiko, much less Aoshi. Just an innocent suggestion. |
Reviewed By: KittyMeowMaxwell On: February 28, 2003 22:14 CST
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Hey, this is really good. All the writing is brilliant and I can't wait for the next part. But... I tried to go to the site that you said was the only site where the interveiws and stuff would be, and it wasn't there. Only got a "we cannot find that page" message. Just thought you ought to know. ^^'
~KittyMeowMaxwell (keikocat98@hotmail.com) |
Reviewed By: TwilightStar On: July 22, 2003 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!!! I love this fic and i cant wait for the next part ppppllleeeaaassseeed update soon. well i think ive made my point soooo see yas!!
P.S. i disagree with "Maeven" up there i think you've done a wonderful job with Misaos char. she is alittle well "energetic" but oh well i dont see anything wrong with that.^-^ |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 19:22 CST
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sugoi! im in a hurry or id write more, but its so good! and long too. always appreciate the long chappys^^ keep it up |
