| "Frozen Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 12:11 CDT
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Could you plaese post again? I wanna know what happens! (Knives and Me Inc. enters in dramatic silence) Mave: Yeah, so continue or the chocobos will run you over! Rayne: Post! I wanna know as well as Kage! Mokushiroku: Yeah, you , you, gah! MY BABY! UTENA! oh, yeah, reality, er... write more... Namakeru: I'm writing because Kage threatened to kill me agian if I didn't. Ya know there's only so many times you can be resurrected, no da? Knives: I will kill all the butterflies if you don not update4 soon. Until then, I shall hold them, and all the sugar chickens that exist in this ningen world hostage. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 20, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will Bakura do? OMG!! Pleaze update!!! Poor Yugi!!
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Reviewed By: mystique On: December 18, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So cool! Want to see more Y/Y & B/R! Who the hell was that assassin girl? Want to see Yami come clean about his past and open up to Yugi. Post next chapter SOON!
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Reviewed By: MoonFaerie On: December 10, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh you should do a Yami/yugi pairing first *sigh* i am such a drama queen so i wanna know if yamis'gonna be nicer to yugi now that yugi saved his life
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Reviewed By: DA 101 On: October 11, 2003 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story keep them coming PLEASE try to review ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^ *_*
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Title: my vote
Reviewed By: yamisangel69 On: October 05, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote for # 1 yugi and yami... this is a great fic ....KEEP WRITING
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Reviewed By: Emri Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 14:51 CDT
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Un, i think you shoul;d write the next chappie oin Ryou and Bakura! *gives ramdomasdf Bakura and Ryou plushies* Here ya go! Portable inspiration! ^^ Keep up da good work! Goin' geat so far!
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Reviewed By: Daughter of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
add new chapter
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Reviewed By: MLG On: September 27, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please, please, please can you focus the next chapter on Yugi and Yami? :) and by the way keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've only just finished read and i was wondering if you could out a bit more ryou/bakura action in it. i like it and all its just they play such a small role, and i wan't them to express their love XD --alli hearts
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before, I vote for Yami/Yugi. It's about time that something went right for both of them. Good story so far.
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Reviewed By: Yami no Katya On: September 24, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* *holds up HUGE sign that says 'YAMI/YUGI'* Me wants some lovely Yami/Yugi goodness! lol. Very nice chapter. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: tarigarma56 On: September 24, 2003 11:49 CDT
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AT LAST ANOTHER CHAPTER I LIKED IT YOUR HISTORY IS INTERESTING TRY TO FINISH IT SOON ABOUT THE PAIRINGS I WOULD LIKE YAMI/YUGI SORRY ABOUT THE GRAMMAR I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND MY POINT
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Reviewed By: zinx On: September 23, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story a lot what happend how come you didn't keep on writing like you promised it has almost been fuor months since you wrote the last chapter.I hope that you would write soon .
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Reviewed By: sprinket On: June 28, 2003 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good u should put the next chapter up plz!!!!!! O and write more like it cause tat was really good only bit i didn like was how u made yami so mean and cruel!!!!!!! |
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