| "Does Love Always Win?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
dude! that was great! plz continue soon! much love never forget the love!
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Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: June 16, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well its ok but try to improve on your grammer.(commas and spelling). Can't wait to see who the other person is. |
Reviewed By: bronie bite On: March 03, 2003 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.....hmm.......ok id have 2 agree with the other reviewers.....kagome going up 2 inu and saying i luv u??i dont think so.......heres more like it
(inuyasha is walking back to the village)
kagome-whats wrong inuyasha u look worried?
inuyasha-feh its none of ur business wench
miroku-inuyasha you shouldnt b talking to lady kagome like that
inuyasha-what?now you know how to talk to women now you leach?
kagome-sit!
GOMEN IM SRRY 4 THE SHORT STORY CHANGE......BUT I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW 2 POST MY STORIE UP ON HERE......SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME!!!IF U CAN PLEASE GIVE ME DIRECTIONS ON HOW U DO IT!!........GOD THAT WAS SO IMBARESSING...LOL...OK IM OUT...LOL BUT IF U CAN HELP MY E-MAILS ADRESS IS BRONIE BITE@AOL.COM |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Kagome seemed a bit out of character. Kagome comes out of the blue and tell Inuyasha that she loves him and then kiss him, without feeling a little shy or something close to that. It just doesn't seem like something Kagome would do. And when does she come to that conclusion so easily? Not only that, but it wasn't very descriptive. The length of the story was fine to me. I'm just giving construsctive criticism, no means of malice, just my opinion in what didn't seem right. Take your time, there is no deadline. :) |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um let me see...it was beond short give us a little detail next time like if Inu Yasha doestn't want to be with Kikyou why is saying he is leaving Kagome...it was just a little rushed...don't give up |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
update soon k bye |
Reviewed By: taoac On: February 27, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
as inuyasha would say FEH!!!! It's suppost to be a story NOT a scene... |
