| "To LiVe" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: what?
Reviewed By: human kuytf On: February 15, 2005 20:11 CST
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i cant write to well my self but i noticed that not one word was spoken between the characters and you said it was a siefer riona fic but the characters were squall riona finallt wtf was with the knife
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Reviewed By: you suck. On: January 10, 2004 12:42 CST
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wow. i doth believe i shall first poke my eyes incessantly after reading this and pray it blinds me. then perhaps i'll murder myself. this was without a doubt the worst sample of the english language that i have ever seen in my entire life. there was not one good quality line in this paragraph long porno that you call fanfiction. WTF man? i cant even begin to say how completely atrocious this was.
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Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the most abysmal fanfiction I have ever come across in my life. First of all, you grammar is deplorable and below par. Second, your plot is catastrophic because you have no machinate. Third, your seriously not a hundred percent all straight in the acumen and that's all I have to say. |
Reviewed By: Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 09:16 CST
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EXCUSE ME?! What planet do you live on? That was so OOC, i think i'm going to puke. NOT only that, porn, bad porn. ugh. Spelling!! Grammar?! Where are they? Please! Give this story some romance! Or even a plot! Ohhh, *gags* What was the anal sex about? Was she wearing her underwear?? Why did Rinoa have a knife? This is an amazingly silly story, get it sorted! |
Reviewed By: slayer77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 00:47 CST
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hey people! don't make me revew for myself! |
Reviewed By: methakamon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well its cool and all but it seems to be a lil shorter but all in all its a cool fic ;) |
