| "Project Mile Two" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like this one, please keep up the good work. and i think Ranma should get witgh both girls. untell next time Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O I have NO fscking clue what the hell some of these reviewers have been smoking when they wrote whatever the hell this tripe is that they've written here, but anyway... I liked this... For one of your first fics, it's very good. I don't know if you are going to continue this, but I hope you do. Mostly 'cause I now have this need to see Gasaraki and find out what the hell a KT is...
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Reviewed By: Seasons Changing101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are SO RUDE!!! You find out a persons buddy list and then you flame them!!! Do you KNOW how freakin' TIRED of you I AM?!! Don't know? I'll tell you! Quit flameing my friends and myself!! Let me ask you something, did you even READ the fic that you flamed?! Huh, huh, did ya? I thought so. You know what? BACK OFF BASTARD!!!!! Pick on somebody ELSE for a change, OK?!! GOOD!
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Title: My god
Reviewed By: Kicker On: May 04, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another bad fic!! Please delete this fic too!! THIS FIC SUCKS!! DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETEDELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETEDELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETEDELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE DELETE!! Need I say more??
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Reviewed By: Inu-=Jai On: February 23, 2004 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! that sucked!!!!
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Reviewed By: DJ On: February 01, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope your life is doing better. The story looks good with a nice balance of action, humor and story.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: October 23, 2003 10:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story
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Reviewed By: NesTea On: July 05, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so far! Keep up the good work, though being cured like that? we DO need more of a reason than just what you gave us in chapter 8, but other than that. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: jmm44 On: July 03, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story alot of unanswer questions or explanations to events. A good example is in chapter 8, how and why was Ranma cured of his curse? I can image using science to generate a new lung and kidney for him but, the way you cured the curse I can't buy without a good explanation,which you didn't include. I think you should leave him with the curse because I think would add to plot since Nokoda's cousin seems to be interested in it. |
Reviewed By: Oni no Kage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Though I am not very familiar with Gasaraki, I have enjoyed this immensely so far. My only criticism is that the chapters are a little short, but the story itself makes up for that. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: March 04, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good premise, but the chapters are a bit short. Kodachi would of course see this as proof of her feelings all of the time. Ranma would probably ignore it unless it meant he could learn new techniques. Maybe with his mother's influence he could be extracted from his father's. |
Reviewed By: Jay On: February 27, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good for a teaser.
Don't crossover Healing Time.
Use this as the start of a new story. |
