| "tHe DeStInY oF ChAlLeNgE" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2011 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read many b/v fics, but this is very from the other fics. Very good so far. |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brillian story, but you so horrible to end it like that i cant believe you killed him of (sobs) poor bulma left all alone to die!!
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Title: TT
Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 10:38 EST
Comment/Review:
Sooo... this is another hanging in the air story. but the reviews seems good, i am now at a dilemma wondering if i should 1) read it anyway, get hooked and cry where you left it hanging 2) give it a miss and never now how good the story is. but really, if one day inspiration hits you, please write again, its never too late
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Title: *Falls over and DIES*
Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 22:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If that is the end then I am going to kill myself. Your story was one of the GREATEST I've ever read. In all seriousness, please do not let this be the end. I will hurt someone, maybe me, if this is truly the end of this wonderful story. I feel like my heart has been ripped out, put in a blender, and fed to some sick, lowly, disgusting, vicious creature. I can't even cry. I have no tears to shed. I feel dead and empty, yet filled with a multitude of emotions. Please don't let me keep feeling this way. PLEASE don't let this be the end of your story. I beg of you to write more. Let her tears be like that of a phoenix or let it all be a dream...Please don't kill me like this. I say all of that from the depths of my heart and soul. I only wish that you could hear my voice, and the pain laced in it. I truly hope that you will write more, and won't leave it like this. Thank you. Very sincerly. ~MistressChaos~
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Title: marybess
Reviewed By: bess On: October 27, 2003 13:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I have been gone 3 months you changed story , lmoa its just as good as it was better But I have a small brain , do not let this be the end!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reader ishtarr On: October 13, 2003 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great story with a touchimg end. it touched the heart. write more.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was that the end? Please tell me that wasn't the end. Don't get me wrong, it was great and all, but my brain just can't let in end likr that. damn
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Reviewed By: Jako On: July 07, 2003 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall rating, yes, is a ten, for perfection. I love this fic!!!!!! And what the Hell? Haven't updated since Feb 28th??????? IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Looks up two reviews, 0_o Your only giving updates to people who review? jakotothemax@hotmail.com There it is, no bombard me with NEW chapters!!!!!! err... yeh ^_^ Love the fic and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: The Ouiji's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is utterly wonderful. I'm not even finished with it yet, though. I just wanted to know why you edited out their first loe -making scene. The way you write it wuld have been just as loving and tener as the way you described their emotions.
Sincerely... |
Reviewed By: natalya On: March 19, 2003 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is excellent!!! and I sooooo enjoyed reading it the writer obviously got Vegeta and bulma character captured so well and they weren't one bit ooc, it is a different story and i'd really want to see what a good ending it is going to have
well done xxxxxxxxxx |
Reviewed By: Kristina On: March 18, 2003 16:40 EST
Comment/Review:
Are you seriously only giving the updates, to the people who review? Well if you are then I'd like the udpates, thanx 4 telling me! Email me them please!! I'm at D6f10@aol.com, thanx bunchas!! |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! if no one will review, I'll review then!! I wanna know the rest!!!!!!!!!!! Please update! this is the coolest story. I hope things go well at the end!!! |
