| "Blood of life" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl, you know I love your story. Keep going...and occasionally updating! Lol! Talk to you later!!!
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Reviewed By: Snugwel1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far but it would be nice if you updated this one and some of your other fics as well because the suspense is killing me:)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, just thought that I should say again what a great chapter this is and I can't wait to see your next one. Oh, and thanks for the thank you!
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Reviewed By: Heidi On: October 15, 2003 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lOVE WERE THIS STORY IS HEADED AND i REALLY HOPE YOU UPDATE REAL SOON i LOVE THE VAMPIRE ELEMENT OF THIS STORY IT IS SO COOL. uPDATE SOON PLEASE i REALLY CAN NOT WAIT
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Reviewed By: heidi On: September 27, 2003 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love were this story is going so please update soon I can not wait 6 month again.
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I love it very original concept... Update Soon
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, and just in case U R confused about the change in name spelling...I found out I was spelling it wrong so I changed it. Ok, bye now. Manda
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was a great chapter! Oh, and yes I would certainly be willing to check anything you want me too. My e-mail address is theoujismate@yahoo.com, so mail me and tell me what the scoop is. C Ya
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Reviewed By: The Ouiji's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very imaginative story. I absolutely love it. Please continue. I will be waiting anxiously. Oh, also, if you know an author in need of a beta-reader, please inform me.
Sincerely,
Manda~~~ |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: March 05, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey!
I like your fic! your grammar is a little choppy, but that's okay, i know mine is a little funny too. I've never been the greatest fan of the Bulma/Brolli thing, but hey it's a means to an end.
Bulma the once-human, now vampire Saiyan was a little on the kind of complex side. Did you ever notice how all of us B/V romance authors like to put the two of them through as much crap as possible before letting them be happy? Is that what you're going to do? Make them suffer a little?
nothing like good ol' angst to keep readers interested.
Aren't perky roommates with perky friends annoying as hell. I had a religious airhead for a suitemate in college and sometimes i wished a guy would just come along and 'lay it' on her, so she would shut up. Her high pitched voice and giggling made me thank whoever's up there that she wasn't my roommate.
anyway, update soon. i'll try to review every chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: March 05, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Something i forgot to offer; if you would like any help in your writing or you just need someone to read over your stories before you update, you can email me at Lone_Vixen@hotmail.com if you like. i just wanna help out. and if you don't need help, then still email me, if you have time, to let me know when yer gonna update.^_^ thanks |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: March 05, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. i love the ones where bulma is given this incredible power and i really hope her and Vegeta will be together some time in this story. *is obsessed with B/V get-togethers* ^_^
i do suggest that you read over your writing if you do not already. i saw alot of mistakes in spellings, misplacement of words, or absense of words. and the dialogue isn't writen correctly. for example, the begining of a dialogue should be capitalized and such. i really can't explain it all too well. i'd have to be given something to correct.
and something about the story confuses me...did the Saiyans see bulma's tail when they captured her? if they did, wouldn't they find that strange that a saiyan was on earth? and if they didn't see it, how could they not? unless bulma kept it in her pants. a little unfortable i'd imagine.. lol
eh, i think that's all i can think of for now, as far as suggestions go. it seems to take you a while to update..are you in the middle of writing other fics?
over all i'd say good job. as a writer myself, i can appreciate ideas brewed up by other authors. this one is definatly original and interesting. you really need to get some more chapters up cause i'll be keeping my eye open for updates. ^_^ Good luck, and i hope you get more reviews. i know i'll be putting ones up for the up-coming chapters. ^_^ take care |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi Pandora666. Even though we have the same title. Our stories are different. It's very interesting keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Zungda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! That was cool! Hurry and finish it so that I see what else is your head! |
