| "time on earth" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: weluvanime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Kawaii!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ?????? On: July 30, 2004 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but please fix your spelling.
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Reviewed By: Rouge_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just an out right great sstory
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Reviewed By: girldancer On: July 01, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: girldancer On: March 15, 2003 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Leaping Fawn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Duo and Serena fics! There so hard to find! |
Reviewed By: christina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks good for a start I like Duo/Serena stories and would like to see you update this soon. Just one thing you need to use Capital letters you were doing good then stopped. Otherwise your story is really good. So please update soon thank you. |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: February 28, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please continue! its so good i like the part of "no way!!" and"yes way" its so funny!^-^ please continue and write more soon!!!! i'll be waiting!!^-^ *hugs duo*
~bunny~ |
Reviewed By: christina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi just read the second chapter and it was good. You did good with capital letters and your story is geeting really good . I look forward to the next chapter to see how Duo gets his foot out of his mouth. Good job and please update soon. ^_^ |
