| "Hot Summer Days" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: not bad
Reviewed By: Blue_sunflowerz On: October 01, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a great idea but i didnt like the way it was written I dont know if that makes sense but ya it's really good though :)
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Reviewed By: StarGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 19:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well thanks to you all who like my fanfic.I'll try to write more soon. I've been going through a bit of a hard time but i will update soon. |
Reviewed By: BooBear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like Write MoreFont Color |
Reviewed By: water On: June 21, 2003 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more. please wright more it's getting good. |
Reviewed By: ineluye321 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
i thought this chapter was good. I like the endindg where you added a character. I wonder what wil happen with her there. |
Reviewed By: ineluye321 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story will come out great if you just fix the spelling errors. there wasn't alot though. I really liked how you started it. |
