| "Corrupted Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: M.K. aka Fall Angel On: March 07, 2003 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, the tension between Yohji and Aya! I love it!! Heck, I love this fic!! *giggles* *winks* Oh, don't stop now!! Please continue!! I can't wait to read Aya's reaction *after* finding about Yohji & Omi... er... had their "fun" together. *blushes* XD |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: March 02, 2003 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I love that ending...Makes you want more even though the description doesn't leave much to the imagination. Then again, Yohji's tight pants probably don't leave much to the imagination either, but that doesn't mean we want him to leave'em on. ^_^;;
PEACE OUT =) |
Reviewed By: Kearoru On: February 28, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi, don't tell me that's it! I loved it, well written.. .. but I wanna know what would happen next. . .
you have to write another chapter! . . please? ::big blue eyes:: |
