| "Changed" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: karena On: April 11, 2003 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know, the nice thing about mediaminer is they do have a hit count. so even if no one reviews, you can still see if they're actually reading it. Is this the last chapter? Ch. 9 that is? It's an appropriate ending if it is. I hope to see more of your work here. This site tends to not go down as often as ffn. |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: March 09, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit you confused the hell out of me with the chapter with the lyrics to "A Thousand Miles" but now it makes sense, I think. Ch. 8 was one of your better works. I really liked the tension and anticipation of a confrontation that you put into it. And the end to your chapter was great. Very subtle but effective. So, when does the little guy get to meet his Dad? And whatever other events you have planned for this family in the making? Please continue. I hope my review wasn't to long or confusing. Sometimes I'm the only one that understands me. |
Reviewed By: Blue Glowstick On: March 02, 2003 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Update soon! Really enjoyed reading your fic... |
Reviewed By: Brit-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good story line.I LOVE this story.please make another chapter. |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. There are not many P/V's out there and the fact that you are writhing this makes me think that there is still for the P/V's. Please don't leave me hanging and update soon! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot! Awesome story! I luv it already! |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 On: March 03, 2003 15:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Stop teasing!!!! |
