| "the Battle for Earth" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: THIS IS THE AUTHORESS SPEAKING!!!!
Reviewed By: Taiyo (AKA lil Inu) On: March 19, 2004 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
GOMENGOMENGOMENGOMEN!!!!! GOMEN NASI FOR NOT UPDATING FOR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG!!!!! I HAVEN'T HAD INTERNET FOR A LONG TIME!!! BUT I SWEAR TO YOU THAT WHEN I GET BACK ON MY ACCOUNT (I forgot my password and I'm already logged in on my computer.....*blushes and looks down) THAT I WILL GIVE YOU LOTS AND LOTS OF NEW CHAPTERS!!!! FIVE AT THE LEAST SINCE YOU'VE ALL WAITED SO LONG! I LOVE YOU MY READERS! REVIEWS ARE LIKE SHIKON SHARDS, THEY GIVE ME THE POWER TO WRITE! ~lil Inu
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Reviewed By: Syburr Tiger On: April 05, 2003 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD! You should... wait ... no... you MUST update soon. I love cliff-hangers and all but you MUST CONTINUE!!
~~~p.s. I like that you added your own character. And your fic is the only one that I've read that has Shippo hurt. *Very nice... don't mind other peoples when they "through" stuff at you, you can hurt Shippo ALL YOU WANT. I DON"T CARE!~~~ |
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drops bow and arrow* Why'd you have to say to drop the weapons........ grr.
It's ME again!!!!! Allison you are so evil!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!! Grr... damn you damn you damn you. Whatever, just update soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10's all around as long as you update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Myst runner On: March 22, 2003 00:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Myst:um... I understood the first two chapters but the third chapie was confusing.
Trio: what the hell was it about. it sounded like something my writer would write. *clang*
Myst: *holding frying pan* anyway. i think you need to reupload the third chapie. thanxs from pothead productions. oh yeah i am a mediaminer member i just didn't bother to login. |
Reviewed By: thedrawingfoo On: March 03, 2003 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your fic!
But did you have to make cute, adorable,sweet,kind,nice,adorable little shippo get hurt!?*starts chucking big giant rotting tomatos* |
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I forgot this: *also decks you for hurting Shippo's wonderfull tail*
I hope you learned your lesson. XP
~Kiy~ |
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is the one that threw the giant tomatoes* Damn you and your cliffhangers..... VEry nice fic though. The only reason for the tomatoes is the cliffhangers.
*throws a chair* AND THAT'S FOR HURTING KAGOME!!!!
*gives you candy* That's for writing the fic.
*gives you ramen* And that's for making Inu-san nice to kagoem while she's hurt.
Last but NOT least:
*throws a lay-z-boy armchair at you* AND THAT'S FOR NOT MAKING INU-SAN AND KAGOME-SAN IN A RELATIONSHIP YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
See ya, Al-chan. You'd better make more chappies soon!!
~Kiy~ |
Reviewed By: vikki On: March 01, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love, update soon |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:20 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like it even though its not that much but i know that if you fvinish it that it will be great so update soon k i wanna know what happens with kagome and inu yasha k see ya lates |
