| "Beginning of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: SOOOOOO COOOOOL!!!
Reviewed By: InuandKagsforev On: July 09, 2005 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u R SO COOL AND THAT STORYY WAS THE BEST EVER!! UPDATE ON THE NEXT STORRY SOON SO I CAN READ YOUR WORK AND WRIGHT MORE REVIES!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!! SEE YA!! P.S- U R SOOOOOO COOOOL AGIAN!!! BYE!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic |
Reviewed By: Ragaraza [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can be a mean reviewer, so please don't try to burn my head with psychokinesis after reading this.
You might want to work on the structure of the file. all of the dialogue is stuck together in one sentence. But you know that don't you?
So far, I haven't seen much action, or emotions flying about. But the premise is interesting and I look foreword to reading more. Maybe a couple of chapters devoted on how Inu Yasha deals with Kagome's pregnecy on the harder months? First time fathers are always twitchy, you know.
Punisher |
Reviewed By: miko Reena On: March 08, 2003 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story but it would have been better to tell what the baby was.I hope you would write another part ot it. |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv On: March 04, 2003 06:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like this fic please update update update
*does puppydog pout at screen* plzzzzzzzz |
