| "Sailor Shinigami" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Constructive Criticizer NEEDED
Reviewed By: Flame Thrower On: July 07, 2004 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before you go and start flaming Sailor moon, I suggest you get your lazy ASS out of your chair and watch the japanese version. So you hate her voice, dubbed. Who the FUCK doesn't?! And also I just find your story STUPID beyond words. You lack plot, a story, your characters are way out of style, and not to mention the names! Dear god, if you are too write a fanfiction, do it PROPERLY. Here's a few stupid error's i've noticed:: Serena- That's "Usagi" Rini- Chibiusa Darian, this should be "Darrien" by the way *snort*- Mamoru So, here's a few words for you, grow up and stop hating. Because in the end, you'll have more hating YOU. Later ya idiot. -Flame-Thrower
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Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 11, 2003 05:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I mean it. Keep updating or i will use you as target practice... or even better... i'll use your bishies |
Reviewed By: Eash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
u.u
I will update. As soon as I type it up and get Chrissy to beta read it... |
Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 08, 2003 07:22 CST
Comment/Review:
update it or i will hunt you down... i know where you go to school... |
Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 02, 2003 09:21 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting... here you can put my full name you know... i di'n't know it had sailor moon, but 'ey im a victim of AAD |
