| "What Lies Beneath It All" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: February 22, 2005 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cant make Kagome and Inuyasha have sex yet. It is way too early in the story, then there will be nothing to look forward too. I want Kouga to try to rape her but not get away with it. I wanna see Kagome get in a fight. Where is sesshy? And I like the story even if Inu is OOC. But it is a nice change 4 him. I hope you update soon. This story has a lot of potential. Use your imagination.
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Title: aw maaannn
Reviewed By: kasumi-chan On: April 04, 2004 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more...... *so sad*
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Reviewed By: ioke On: August 11, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! i cant wait to read your enxt chapter!! its really good!! its totally awesome!! would it be possible if you could email me at chipahoy702@ahoo.com for the next chapter??? |
Reviewed By: Inu-fan On: June 24, 2003 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fanfic, I like how you made kikyo evil and Kagome good. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: June 16, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it sooo much! Get the next chp. out soon!! plz. thanx. keep it up! =p |
Reviewed By: Jess On: April 09, 2003 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon! What will happen? =) |
Reviewed By: dith On: April 09, 2003 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooohhhh my god that was ssssooooooo mean and i would like fore u to update soon |
Reviewed By: Angel Darkness On: April 03, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story. Please continue! Update asap or else! .....yeah! or else... |
Reviewed By: Maerlyn On: March 31, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has a lot of promise...I hope you finish it soon! :) |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
im psychotic... whew now that thats off my chest um what am i doing... oh yea i wanted to say UPDATE DAMNIT IT TOOK U TOO FUCKIN LONG SO UPDATE ALREADY!!!!..... told u i was a psycho |
Reviewed By: AthenasFire On: March 08, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Really great! I luv the way Inu Yasha is so much more sensitive than he normally is. I hope he realizes what a bitch Kikyo is, QUICK! Keep writing, its wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
er- yeah im sorta confused about... a lot of things
the prologue is the same as the 3rd chapter, so should the first chapter be the prologue and the prologue be the first chapter?
and the 3rd chapter is really a repeat of the first chapter, so if ya could fix that it would be great!
OMG inuyasha's smart in this one? That's not very common... good for you! |
Reviewed By: Spring^.~Babe On: March 07, 2003 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, WRITE SOME MORE!!!!!!!! k I KNOW THAT IT'S ONLY BEEN 3 CHAPTERS SO FAR BUT IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:53 CST
Comment/Review:
(me crawling on the ground, grab your ankle) Need...more chapters to read...please...dying...
...hope you don't mind I'm reviewing so much. If you want me to I'll stop just email me cause i know im annoying...
^^ALlie^^ |
Reviewed By: 2pac On: March 05, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story, keep writing |
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