| "What Lies Beneath It All" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: dith On: April 09, 2003 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooohhhh my god that was ssssooooooo mean and i would like fore u to update soon |
Reviewed By: Angel Darkness On: April 03, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story. Please continue! Update asap or else! .....yeah! or else... |
Reviewed By: Maerlyn On: March 31, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has a lot of promise...I hope you finish it soon! :) |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
im psychotic... whew now that thats off my chest um what am i doing... oh yea i wanted to say UPDATE DAMNIT IT TOOK U TOO FUCKIN LONG SO UPDATE ALREADY!!!!..... told u i was a psycho |
Reviewed By: AthenasFire On: March 08, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Really great! I luv the way Inu Yasha is so much more sensitive than he normally is. I hope he realizes what a bitch Kikyo is, QUICK! Keep writing, its wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
er- yeah im sorta confused about... a lot of things
the prologue is the same as the 3rd chapter, so should the first chapter be the prologue and the prologue be the first chapter?
and the 3rd chapter is really a repeat of the first chapter, so if ya could fix that it would be great!
OMG inuyasha's smart in this one? That's not very common... good for you! |
Reviewed By: Spring^.~Babe On: March 07, 2003 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, WRITE SOME MORE!!!!!!!! k I KNOW THAT IT'S ONLY BEEN 3 CHAPTERS SO FAR BUT IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:53 CST
Comment/Review:
(me crawling on the ground, grab your ankle) Need...more chapters to read...please...dying...
...hope you don't mind I'm reviewing so much. If you want me to I'll stop just email me cause i know im annoying...
^^ALlie^^ |
Reviewed By: 2pac On: March 05, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story, keep writing |
Reviewed By: BlackWaters On: March 05, 2003 08:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I luved this story! Kagome & Inuyasha better become a couple...Kikyo...that bitch...anyway hope u write more! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is really good! Please update soon.
.^_-.
angel-chan |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Haagin Daaz! Update asap or I will kill you! MUHAHAHAHA!!!
....ok then
Allie |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
update update update |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 09:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool! Please write more soon! This is a really good idea if you ask me! ^^
Allie~ |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 12:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG you have to write more soon! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Allie |
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