"The Perfect Birthday Present" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bsasami153 On: March 19, 2003 12:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm enjoying the story so far so please keep updating. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:55 CST Comment/Review: P.s please read my story "Kooraru" please!!! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:54 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ME WANT MORE!!!!!!
GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!
I DEMAND MORE!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miwa's Girl On: March 18, 2003 09:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, I kinda stopped reading during the part in Kagom's time, I thought Sesshoumaru was a little too OOC, but it seems to have gotten back on track. Shame on you for leaving such a huge cliff-hanger. IT's not fair! |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 21:15 CST Comment/Review: i love this story please con. so upate sooooooooon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: danaiguess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 20:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GREAT! keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 11:27 CST Comment/Review: How Kawaii! Sess was going to protect her from the car demon! ::giggles:: |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 11:09 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am truly enjoying your story. I wonder if Kagome will change a bit since she is now fully complete (soul-wise). |
Reviewed By: ennovymoon On: March 06, 2003 20:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: W-Wh-What happened?
I....I NEED the rest of this story.
I must read the rest of it!
U just have to update soon.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeese!!!! |
Reviewed By: zallifad14 On: March 04, 2003 18:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GIMME MORE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bise b On: March 03, 2003 14:58 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey, great job. keep it up! thanx a bunch! bye |
Reviewed By: Lady Neese On: March 03, 2003 14:18 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Augh! Where is the rest of the story?! Please, please, please continue! |
Reviewed By: sesshomaru lover On: March 15, 2003 18:35 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my gosh are they going to bathe together?! is this going to be a lemon!? are you ever going to update?!please do all these things!!SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: PLEASE On: March 27, 2003 12:35 CST Comment/Review: PLEASE PUT CHAP 14 UP SOON IF U DO I MIGHT GET MY FRIENDS TO R/R |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's mate On: June 03, 2003 21:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well it looks like someone to my advise on going to mediaminer.org not bad not bad at all but I only have 2 questions for u what is the sequals tittle? and what did the letter say let me know by EMAIL PLEASE!!!!!! I want to know how its going to be after this i simply LOVED IT! So PLEASE A.S.A.P Email me so I can read the next part and don't forget to tell me what the letter said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well..... Jamata De Sayonara hope to hear from you soon:-)Peace out Sesshomaru's mate!!!!! |
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