| "A new life" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 06, 2008 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I starting Reading this story yesterday and had to stop b/c I had work. I came back this morning to finish but I had no internet. I can't describe the withdraws I had and my dismantaling the computer spree lol! Finally I was able to finish and am now ready to read the squal! Thank you so much for posting and for being a considerate writer (not starting stories then dropping like their hot until there completed. :D) I enjoyed this story greatly, though in the last couple of chapters, the last 3 or 4 I think, there were some miner spelling errors, but nothing major, (im only mentioning it incase you wish to know, if not ignor little o'l me ^^') A wonderful read and im happy to read the sequal. Until then Ja!
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Reviewed By: synginei On: August 14, 2008 01:06 CDT
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I liked the story as it was. It was interesting to see how they all developed. Trowa was a bit hard to take, Quatre might have been easier but I understand why you used the larger boy. I read this from beginning to end and found it flowed perfectly and the timeline was easy to follow as well as the description and character development. The sequal should be something.
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Title: battousai
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 18:52 CDT
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Yeah!!! Cant wait to read the sequel. Please make it a 1X2 fic thanks!!
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Reviewed By: Konpeitou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 18:41 CDT
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Wow, I just found this now after it was finished otherwise I'd have reviewed as it went along. It's a good story and I can understand completely putting characters like Trowa and Quatre into strange roles. It fueled the story well and I really liked it. I'll be looking forward to seeing the sequel of this, also.
My vote : 1x2! Hilde should just be a friend, methinks... besides, Duo-chan already thinks he's cute, ne? ^^
Oh! And you're very good at english for not being a native speaker. I hadn't even realized it until I read that you weren't, very good command of the language despite a very few errors. Omedetou~! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was just wonderful ... Ihope to read more storys from you soon |
Reviewed By: Duo/Folken/TK On: May 16, 2003 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that it should be 1+2 or 1x2 their isnt really that much of anything between Hildy and Duo to have a relashionship in this fic plus i realy dont like 2xH parings |
Reviewed By: battousai On: May 15, 2003 17:26 CDT
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gasp! what happened to duo?! |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 21:31 CDT
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1x2! I hate 2xH, from my point of view it's like Duo having sex wih a sister. It's just plain incest. I'm glad you had fun in that place you went to ^_^ Well it was an uneventful chapter, but it was still pretty interesting. I'm looking foward to the next one so please don't wait too long to update ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 18:02 CDT
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no, not a whole nother week till you update! oh well, have fun in Spain! May the funness of it inspire you greatly ^_^. I'm addicted to tetris too, it's really addicting. It was so cute how Heero lent Duo his blanket. How thoughtful ^_^. I can't wait to see how Trowa will try to get back at Duo. It should be fun. |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 18:02 CDT
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no, not a whole nother week till you update! oh well, have fun in Spain! May the funness of it inspire you greatly ^_^. I'm addicted to tetris too, it's really addicting. It was so cute how Heero lent Duo his blanket. How thoughtful ^_^. I can't wait to see how Trowa will try to get back at Duo. It should be fun. |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 18:53 CDT
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awe, Duo feels guilty know. Is he softening? *gasp* Will he make friends? *gasp* Poor Quatre, he just seems so... pathetic is the only word I can think of.
Well anyway, great chapter! I want to read more so I will be looking foward to your update!^_^ |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is wounderful please keep going ...i wan't to here more....!!! |
Reviewed By: Sapphire Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
continue please |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 12:38 CDT
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i choose duo! no wait i'm not in the fic (damn) yah glad you updated, do it again soon |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 09:14 CDT
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Poor du-du.
Well we still like him don't we? Is he gonna leave and go back to solo? i can see him doing that. Anyway continue!!!! |
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