| "Nobility" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update your story!!!!!! Please!!!
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Reviewed By: Sinu On: November 07, 2003 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are ya going to update.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is great. I'm also following your other story, the saiya-jin invasion. I like that one too. Hurry with the next chapter!! Please!! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving this so far. Vegeta is so him! I'm loving this story and I hope you update soon. The way its written is great. i can't wait to see how the contest goes! I think Bulma can win the chess game hands down. Hm...can't wait to see how this story turns out! Will they end up falling for each other?! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 23, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! ITS SO GOOD!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan_Lady On: June 08, 2003 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far! I really like the idea of a contest ~ hehe especially the 3rd battle : ) Really interested in knowing Vegeta's dark past now as I'm sure Bulma might change her opinion of the duke when she gets wind of it... update soon please! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I can tell Bulma is going to love her marriage...Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: April 13, 2003 08:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very promising. I have enjoyed what you have written so far and I am looking forward to the next update. |
Reviewed By: Chris On: April 12, 2003 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hay great so far keep going its really different from other BV fan fics I hope you finish it. |
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: April 07, 2003 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot and details thus far I love 'em. Keep going I wonder how Bulma will be able to get Vegeta under her 'control'. Ja ne ^)^ |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty On: March 06, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving this so far. And im diein to meet Vegeta. I'm glad u including some of the other z-fighters. i want to see who else will be making an appearance. This story is commig along great and I love it. Its different, i've never seen it done. please write more soon!
-sb |
Reviewed By: Me On: March 05, 2003 13:01 CST
Comment/Review:
You switched between first person point of view and third person. One is told through the eyes of Bulma (using "I") and the other is told in narrative (using "she"). You should fix this and choose one or the other. |
Reviewed By: marie On: April 13, 2003 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love ya story! cant wait for next chap.
keep it going. |
Reviewed By: Credik On: April 13, 2003 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad so far. Luv the fact that Bulma is a fighter
i hope she doesn't let Vegeta walk over her now that they are wed. |
