| "The sayajin invasion" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kimashi On: June 08, 2003 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, seems a little short to me(but then again i read 100,000 word fanfics, could use a litte more discription, and there were a couple of places the i got comfused, but over all it is a good fic, one of the best plots i have read.
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I haven't been here in a while. lolz. Anyways, nice chapter and fic. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rye On: April 12, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally LOVE your Fanfic!
The plot is fabulous and the story is even BETTER! Keep it up girl!
Oh, and I must say, I love it when girls kick bald headed monkey apes! Yay! Continue! *hands everyone a coctail*
~Rye~
And may the veggie-power be with you!
U.U just try to work a lil on your writin' style, but never let yourself get down girl! |
Reviewed By: Rye On: April 12, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally LOVE your Fanfic!
The plot is fabulous and the story is even BETTER! Keep it up girl!
Oh, and I must say, I love it when girls kick bald headed monkey apes! Yay! Continue! *hands everyone a coctail*
~Rye~
And may the veggie-power be with you!
U.U just try to work a lil on your writin' style, but never let yourself get down girl!
*sits infront of her PC patiently and stares at her screen waiting for the next update* O_O |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady On: April 06, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant see how everyone loves yer fic, its slow going, boring, and justplain stupid, sry but im not one for holding back with my opnion. its sux |
Reviewed By: Alunya On: April 05, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Looks fun and interesting, keep up the good work ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 05, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think the chapter is great. |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 05, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think the chapter is great. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! Awesome ficcie! I luv it! It's one of the best AU's I've seen in a while! |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, nice chapter! I loved it! Update soon, ok? |
Reviewed By: SevenStar On: March 09, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
So far so good... Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. On: March 05, 2003 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please continue pleeeeaaasseeeeee |
Reviewed By: The Ouiji's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fanfic. Don;t listen to anyon that tells you otherwise. Keep on writing!! |
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