| "The sayajin invasion" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Please hurry wth our next chapter, i can't wait. |
Reviewed By: Chris On: June 23, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hay great so far keep it up the story is new and really holds your attention right from being to end. Nice to finally have Bulma learning how to fight for a change.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. |
Reviewed By: redmoonlight312 On: June 14, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it but you could make the chapters a little bit longer but please continue |
Reviewed By: Kimashi On: June 08, 2003 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, seems a little short to me(but then again i read 100,000 word fanfics, could use a litte more discription, and there were a couple of places the i got comfused, but over all it is a good fic, one of the best plots i have read.
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I haven't been here in a while. lolz. Anyways, nice chapter and fic. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Rye On: April 12, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally LOVE your Fanfic!
The plot is fabulous and the story is even BETTER! Keep it up girl!
Oh, and I must say, I love it when girls kick bald headed monkey apes! Yay! Continue! *hands everyone a coctail*
~Rye~
And may the veggie-power be with you!
U.U just try to work a lil on your writin' style, but never let yourself get down girl! |
Reviewed By: Rye On: April 12, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literally LOVE your Fanfic!
The plot is fabulous and the story is even BETTER! Keep it up girl!
Oh, and I must say, I love it when girls kick bald headed monkey apes! Yay! Continue! *hands everyone a coctail*
~Rye~
And may the veggie-power be with you!
U.U just try to work a lil on your writin' style, but never let yourself get down girl!
*sits infront of her PC patiently and stares at her screen waiting for the next update* O_O |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady On: April 06, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant see how everyone loves yer fic, its slow going, boring, and justplain stupid, sry but im not one for holding back with my opnion. its sux |
Reviewed By: Alunya On: April 05, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Looks fun and interesting, keep up the good work ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 05, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think the chapter is great. |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 05, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think the chapter is great. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! Awesome ficcie! I luv it! It's one of the best AU's I've seen in a while! |
Reviewed By: Shateera S. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, nice chapter! I loved it! Update soon, ok? |
Reviewed By: SevenStar On: March 09, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
So far so good... Update soon! |
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