| "Thoughts in a Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! There is nothing i can say about this work other than it is absolutely beautiful. I'm so glad i read this because it's very insightful and enjoyable to read. Not also that but the fic is wistful and almost darkly colored and gives you the feel of seeing it through a fog or in the nightime, does this make any sense? Anyway, this is just a wonderful work and the ending with the poems and Aya leaving Omi that little message? It was heartbreaking and so sweet at the same time. I hope you continue this because it is lovely. :) |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I really am crazy about this fic. I love Omi's voice, so wistful and ruthless at the same time, holding out a little hope. Very well done! |
