| "Operation: Houshi!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ruby youkai On: January 05, 2004 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w........................god i love that monk MIROKU AND SANGO SITTING IN A TREE K-I-S-S-I-N-G.......sorry had to.hahaha ^_-well hurry take ur butt off the couch and write another chapter
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Title: erinlin the random!
Reviewed By: erinlin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 13:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Go sango!
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Reviewed By: Lightstorm On: October 28, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Violet I loved your cluster on words (in another words your fic). It was the best I have read over a long time, but I have to ask were is the other part to it.
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Reviewed By: princess_someone On: July 01, 2003 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well first of all Sango can go with those first few steps of her normal behavior. You know, glaring when he talks to other women, hitting when he gropes, whacking when he asks the question and then only whack him when he gropes her but ignore him if he asks her the question. THat was she hasn't refused him but she hasn't agreed making Miroku think that she might be willing and hopefully keep him away from other females while she's trying to seduce him. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well THIS promises to be different!
Can't wait to see where it goes! Sango's a little OOC (less demure than she shows in the series, but seems spunky and determined). The first-person perspective is working well so far. I'll keep an eye open for the update. |
Reviewed By: lady kalanag On: March 06, 2003 11:34 CST
Comment/Review:
this is like how do i explain this this is what we all no what sango thinks please write more |
Reviewed By: Kissing Kitty On: March 06, 2003 11:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Go Sango go!!! Seduce that pervert of a monk!! I really like your fik!! Hope to see updates!!! |
