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| "Yugi and Yami's Wedding" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] | Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! This is Yamifanner. I'm now called Diamond Princess becasue of the fact that I got banned. Well, the Yugi/Yami lemons are hot and steamy!! I can't wait to read one about Ryou/Bakura. Well, this was a awesome story.
| Title: I love it
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 06:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic it was so wonderful and to let you know the ending was just great. Bye for now and keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Sailor Rose Again On: July 29, 2004 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon but i think you should do a joey and seto wedding that would be very funny to me!!! you are my FAV author you rock!And for the rest of the people that say they hated the gay stuff there Fucking losers who should'nt read it!
| Title: Great Ending!
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: June 03, 2004 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your ending was fine and I look forward to your next segment in the couples coupling series. ^_^ Can only imagine what you'd do with Jou x Seto and Malik x Marik *giggles*
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 18:42 CDT
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Awww, it's over... OOOOH a Ryou/Kura ficcy? I love that couple, they're one of my fav. couples too! That was a cool ending, I'm definitely putting you on my fav. authors!
| Reviewed By: Internet girl On: April 23, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should end it as very good lemon then they sould go home and do it again. I did like this story very much. Please write more to this Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 20:03 CDT
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Baka ningens. Don't read a friggin story you know you won't like! Waste your time on your own meaningless lives and leave us to our bidding! One day you will truly regret the critisim!!!! I vote for D!!!! Update some more!!!
| Title: to seto's
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 23:13 CST
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I you don't like yaoi or people who are gay, DON'T FUCKING READ THE STORY!!! Honestly people, what's the point of reading a story you know you'll hate?
| Reviewed By: seto's On: March 25, 2004 10:49 CST
Comment/Review:
yaoi is nasty so are gays
| Reviewed By: Yami_Kari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
D. Something romantic WITH Lemon
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D, D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D, D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think you know my choice. Lemon is a MUST. Great story! I've never heard of a gay wedding with Yami and Yugi either. UPDATE!
| Title: Yami and Yugi's Wedding
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: February 28, 2004 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this fanfic is getting good because Yami and Yugi really love each other so much. I've read all of the chapters and it gets good by reading each chapter.
| Reviewed By: yamiyugifanadic On: February 28, 2004 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, there HAS to be lemon!!! MUST BE LEMON!!! No lemon, bad ending. Make it REALLY romantic though, not sappy though. How about this. "Yugi and Yami were standing by the railing of there new...(sorry, was it a apartment...?) looking out at the sun set." Yami says something about the night before. Blah blah blah,(to lazey to erite all). Then Yami will say something like...oh that he can be...more sexy or something that Yugi was the night before. Somethin like that. Romantic to sexey, that's how I write my stories Then yami...hmm...he'll get a whip...or some other tool like that ^_^ and do something. After they have there "fun" then it's up to you on how you want to end it. Most likley have them say they love eachother (duh!). Then the rest is up to you ^_^
| Reviewed By: yolanda On: February 21, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should end it romantic and with a nice lemon b/c it would be a good kind of wrap up for your story. I enjoyed your story a lot and give 5 stars, 2 thumbs up ^^!
| Title: Vote for Ending
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: January 29, 2004 13:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This was one of the best fics I have read in awhile. I choose option D (something romantic WITH a lemon) for the ending.
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