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| "Yugi and Yami's Wedding" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] | | Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 > » ] | Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 22:07 CST
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D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D, D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D, D,D,D,D,D,D,D,D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think you know my choice. Lemon is a MUST. Great story! I've never heard of a gay wedding with Yami and Yugi either. UPDATE!
| Title: Yami and Yugi's Wedding
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: February 28, 2004 17:15 CST
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I think this fanfic is getting good because Yami and Yugi really love each other so much. I've read all of the chapters and it gets good by reading each chapter.
| Reviewed By: yamiyugifanadic On: February 28, 2004 08:11 CST
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Ok, there HAS to be lemon!!! MUST BE LEMON!!! No lemon, bad ending. Make it REALLY romantic though, not sappy though. How about this. "Yugi and Yami were standing by the railing of there new...(sorry, was it a apartment...?) looking out at the sun set." Yami says something about the night before. Blah blah blah,(to lazey to erite all). Then Yami will say something like...oh that he can be...more sexy or something that Yugi was the night before. Somethin like that. Romantic to sexey, that's how I write my stories Then yami...hmm...he'll get a whip...or some other tool like that ^_^ and do something. After they have there "fun" then it's up to you on how you want to end it. Most likley have them say they love eachother (duh!). Then the rest is up to you ^_^
| Reviewed By: yolanda On: February 21, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should end it romantic and with a nice lemon b/c it would be a good kind of wrap up for your story. I enjoyed your story a lot and give 5 stars, 2 thumbs up ^^!
| Title: Vote for Ending
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: January 29, 2004 13:15 CST
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This was one of the best fics I have read in awhile. I choose option D (something romantic WITH a lemon) for the ending.
| Reviewed By: MichiruT On: January 28, 2004 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Romantic with a lemon most definately, its a great combo for a great story =^_^=
| Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 17:04 CST
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Definatly romantic and lemon!
| Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 26, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Romantic with a lemon!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Pick Something Romantic With A Lemon,cause thats a good combo I think anyways. Loved the story, can't wait till the end.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 12:25 CST
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^.^ Yami's very posessive...*coughs* Anyway, as for the poll thing, definetely choose D. After all, it can't hurt to have some romance w/ a lemon.
| Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: January 19, 2004 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! YOU UPDATED!! *salivates* I love this story so much! You are a great writer! Sorry to hear about your back. I hope you get well soon!
| Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AllI got to say is Finally I was wondering when you were gonna end this. It was as really good story.
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes away drool* All I can say is, they're damn sexy & kinky. *coughs* Well, update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i love it. you betterkeep on writing or i wil kill you! (not, but i would be pissed!) much love tayko
| Reviewed By: lemon-hunter On: December 30, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story mate please update this soon!
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