| "Green Eyed Doll" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: I liked it
Reviewed By: Zelosfangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a very clever and well devised fic, I can actually imagine Nakago as a principal as strange as it may be...
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Reviewed By: Clairla On: August 10, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story but it's not really a hentai. Because he just smacked her with torturing leather and stuff. The only thing I saw that was hentai was when Miaka had to strip infront of Nakago.. but please continue.. But if you want it to be truelly hentai then her punishment next chapter for being tardy again should be rape.. Nakago rapes Miaka ok?! just some advise.
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Reviewed By: Yume_Sakura On: July 21, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your story! When you update can ya sent me an email? Email EternityPetals@yahoo.com Thanks! Love n Peace
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Amber Cradle On: December 27, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
coz it's nice and you can really portray the character's feelings and they're not ooc. he rapes her doesn't he? he abuses the students too, ne? i like this really. plese continue.
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Reviewed By: kittystar On: December 18, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good please update it.
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Reviewed By: VampKit On: December 07, 2003 17:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I dont know why would ppl flame you but this is good! I hope you update or something ^^;;
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Reviewed By: tinytoonz On: September 10, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
my enjoyment factor and overall rating will get better, that is when you finish writeing the next couple of chapters. SO PLEASE WRITE FOR ME PLEASE
Your Fan tinytooz :') |
Reviewed By: Amiboshi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You ARE continuing this, RIGHT???*Bats eyelashes* *Frying pan comes out of nowhere and bashes Ami-chan on the head* Ahem. Anyway,I love this story and I'll be looking for more!
Amiboshi-chan |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: June 07, 2003 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is awesome and totally original. I hope u will put up the nex t chapter. |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love alternate pairings, so this was ok. I hope that you let Miaka fall in love with Nakago and post the chapter up soon, please. |
Reviewed By: vanessa-chan On: March 14, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me like! me like! plz write more soon! so does miaka like enjoy the punishment she recieves from nakago??? well anyways, WRITE MORE!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
NEXT CHAPPIE!!!! |
Reviewed By: ... On: March 08, 2003 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strange...not like anything i've read before. It's well written and freaky. NAKAGO IS SCARY!!! ~_~ phew...just had ta get that out...he scares me! |
Reviewed By: Lady Diamond On: March 07, 2003 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more soon. It would be sooo evil if they fell in love *-* okay so this is an AU, she was never Suzaku no Miko and he was never her enemy, or was he reborn in this world with his memories? That would be sooo sadstically wicked *-* So one thing I didnt get did Miaka secretly LIKE her punishment like that other girl or does she truly hate it, etc etc etc. Good story. More xD |
Reviewed By: Animefreak On: March 06, 2003 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to hear what happened to your account, because something like that happened to me once. But anyway, please continue your story. |
