| "Breakfast and Other Stories" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of Death Sakura On: May 14, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very confusing Switching all the time, especially at the end at the start that was just weird. But I like the couple situation and the way you made it so Marron wasn't the subdued if you know what I mean, The female in the story. Overall a fun fic.
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Reviewed By: Sara On: June 25, 2003 07:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Decided today to go through the fics I liked and be nice and review. Would like to say that I hope your having as much fun writing these snippets as I am reading them. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Saint Xio On: June 11, 2003 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHA! This is my favorite incest coupling. Carrot is just adorable in the childish type sexual manner and Marron, he's just perfect for the lovable pervert. ^_^ I like how you put these two together like that. I really wouldn't go so far as calling this a fluff, but the way you slip them out and in the lemony situations is very elegant and runs the stories beautifully. We need more people like you ^-^V |
Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
No reviews for this yet? Bah! People just don't know good work when they see it, and this is excellent work. I think I like everything you've written so far though. Anyhow, keep it up, love the feelings between the two ,and the conversation with Gateau is priceless!
Her Supreme Omni-potence,
Miko No Hoshi |
