| "Passage Through Shadow 3: Rain of Mercy" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 11, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Falls on the ground and twitches* How can she be Fate? It's just- I mean- Gragh! Nice instalment.^^ Wasn't expecting it to happen so soon~
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 02, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
About time :p Just kidding. Nice update. Continue, hopefully, soon.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Shatter-Storm On: March 01, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooo! a perfect chapter!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Elemental_Anguish On: October 29, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai~! You updated! ...Logan needs to die! *Stabs him* ... o.o;; Hahaha... errr... *Runs off*
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Shatter_Storm On: October 24, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update, a bit too long between chapters but worth it. Hope your able to keep writing at a steady pace.
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Anguish On: June 18, 2003 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I can't wait for the next instalment. |
Reviewed By: Elemental_Anguish On: May 24, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! But you already knew that. :p I like hearing Kage's back story. Continue when you can^^ |
Reviewed By: Shatter_Storm On: April 12, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding, one of the best chapters to date. I really enjoyed the play out between Ali and Logan. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Heekun On: April 01, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Great chapter, I expected nothing less from you. Continue! |
Reviewed By: Shatter_STorm On: March 31, 2003 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
All good, cept this line is repeated twice in a row.
"I'll go to the Penguinmon village." Iori said. "I want to see with my own eyes that she's not mistreating them." |
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 08, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue, please. (second attempt) And, gomen. |
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 08, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(continued) |
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 08, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>_> Logan should have drowned. > |
Reviewed By: Shatter_Storm On: March 06, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive. I wonder how the other CD will feel about this turn of events |
Reviewed By: Heekun On: March 16, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I really like Kage and Logan's fight... mainly due to the fact that I helped. ^^ I know I have said it time and time again, so saying this will be redundent, however I have to say it nontheless, Hikari is such a minx~! X) ...Yeah, I had to say it...again. |
