| "A Demon's heart" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 27, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hell to the ya that was a graet fanfic a cheesey happy ending but evry one loves thous so its all good again grate story later |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to take more time when you write. Your sentence structure is not good. Also, some parts of this read almost exactly the same as a few other fics I've read. This isn't a flame, but someone has to be the honest witch here (~_^) If all of the reviews tell you how great this is, it is unlikely that you will attempt to improve your writing. Try reading what you write, then comparing it to a published book. You will see the differences, and perhaps that can help you improve. |
Reviewed By: Wildfire On: June 22, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the pairing of Sess/Kagome! ^_^ That is what I like best. And erm... what is up with all the Lemons..? o_O? Anyways, keep updating! I wanna read more...! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: June 16, 2003 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i enjoyed your story
only one problem:you haven't finished it yet
write more or else
just kidding
also write more fics |
Reviewed By: DragonDame57 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was totally awesome!!! i mean wow.... that was good.. so much lemons thought! lolz... but no matter... how could u leave it ata cliff hanger like that?! continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Rune2003 On: June 11, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!I really like this story it is totally awsome!Please update soon^^ja |
Reviewed By: Mehhh On: May 22, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you! O.O;, ok, maby i dont o.O;, but still, you need to write another chapter!! ;.;, i just finished reading all of it, n i want mmoorrreee @.@;, so... write another chapter..or.. uh... or... or.. IL ACTUALLY HATE YOU! =D |
Reviewed By: *Shichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been trying to write a review for your work for so long, but MM.org must not like me. *hits stupid computer*
Anyways, I love your fic and good luck with the whole writer's block thing, I just got over my own. Yeah, writers block isn't fun, but I find it helps to start a new story or right a one-shot *hint hint*
Well I wish you good and fun ideas ^_^
~*Shichan |
Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: April 24, 2003 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Pls continue and UPDATE SOON!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: vampirebunny On: April 08, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP DATE FASTERRRRR lol sorry i just like ur story keep it going ur doing great! later! |
Reviewed By: cutiepie99 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story! Update soon!!! :) |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshou!Please donīt let anything happen to Kagome or at least let him be able to save her, cause he deserves someone who loves him and he can love in return!Please update sonn!Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!!! Thank you for reveiwing my story! I really like yours! Sess/Kag all the way! ^_^* You're a very talented writer. I try but I really can't write lemon scenes. ~_~** Please update! Don't forget to check out my story!!! The Sess/kag lover-
Fluffysgirl4ever |
Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: April 04, 2003 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! Pls continue, keep up the good work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 03, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice
cant wait to se more |
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