| "A Demon's heart" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 10:41 CST
Comment/Review:
DFON'T PUT KIKYO IN THE STORY AGAIN SHE SUCH AN ASS SO DON'T PLEASE |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: cutiepie99 On: March 24, 2003 02:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, keep up the good work and update soon plz!! |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 20, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter felt rushed to me like a ... ahem quicky
i think the kiling of naraku went to fast you could have dedicated a chapter to that i think ( my opinion) but the smut / lemon was very good and i think after reading that .. no comment lol
keep up the good work =D
claudia |
Reviewed By: sessluvskag On: March 15, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story..
There should be more sess/kag stories
keep up the great job |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story please update soooooooon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: March 15, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Great part, can't wait for another one. Love the new look for Kagome ^-^ |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 13, 2003 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm
this was interesting..
Especially the part where sess allowed out his emotional admintance to loving her to her friends.
And then she sat poor inu
( i can see that, she gets mad and it is a reflex)
But i can see how it would hurt sessy
very good..
alittle angusty for me... (( not into saddness ))
HAPPY THOUGHTS!!!
but this was good,
please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: March 11, 2003 03:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Great part, can't wait for more. Maybe you can do something about Kikyo...^_^ |
Reviewed By: ennovymoon On: March 09, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When r u goinig to update...
I truely loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: quico On: March 09, 2003 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked your story! please keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE ALL FANFICS WITH SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME THANKS KEEP THEM COMMING ~~KISS KISS~~ |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue the story!!!!!!!
please!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE SESS?KAG FICS!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bronie bite On: March 08, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!i cant wait to see the next chapter!i cant wait untill the next chapter!^_^what will inuyasha do when he finds out that kagome and sess have mated?!!will he cry?lol or will he die of pain??lol dont worrie inuyasha i still luv u but i luv this fic and i just want something like that 2 happen srry babe..
(inuyasha comes over and hit me on the head...u baka!i never cry!)@_@ |
Reviewed By: ennovymoon On: March 08, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooooooooo loved it.!
Is there another chapter!!?? |
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