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| "Caught In Time (tentative title)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: _lone_wolf_ On: October 21, 2003 23:46 CDT
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...sweatdrop...better reviewing late than never, huh!? sorries. anyway- you have an awesome set up going ^_^ It could almost be a sort of side story to ftf/teoo..sort of.. ^_^;; Van and Raven will make appearances...yay XDXD I dont care what she says, I think Van is awesome ;) rezo...zero switched around, verynice ;) Oh, and .."History becomes legend, legend becomes myth, and this that should not be forgotten eventually pass out of all knowledge"..thank you Lord of the Rings XD LOVE that book/movie ^_^ So yeah- this story looks interesting! I hope you havent lost interest in it...or lost your creative muse! Keep updating, and I'll keep reading ^_~ that could be a blessing or a curse, depending how you look at it ^_~ One minor, minor improvement..when you are switching scenes, from like, Vega, Bit and the Organoids to Sara and "Steve" her would be assassin, try and put a big space, or some sort of divider to separate the scenes. I was a little confused...otherwise, its lookin good ^_^ *goes off to catch up on your other stories...anything to delay studying..^_~*
| Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: March 28, 2003 22:02 CST
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Finally, 20 days later, I update. Hopefully I shall get a new one up. I have ch. 3 already planned out in my head, while ch.2 is being thought up. (I always do this). Leave a review for me...that is, if you feel like it. | Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King (Not Logged In) On: March 07, 2003 23:18 CST
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And for being the first reviewer....Zinou recieves:::
-a notebook to find uses for Somewhere I belong and
-another chapter hopefully tomorrow (1st chap would have been longer, if I had to broken it up into 2 parts.
It is "interesting"? mmyes, it will be interesting to see lil Fury in a different light.
*Goes to Nero to create CD* I gotta make a new CD to listen to... helps me right, ya know? Well, Ill try to get it up 2 morrow | Reviewed By: Zinou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 22:19 CST
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Interesting. Glad you found a use for the song in your fic .. :) I was still pondering it for mine, myself. *g* It'll be interesting to see Fuhrer in a different light, mmyes? *brow-quirk* :) | Reviewed By: Black Fury On: June 02, 2003 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic f%$^in' rocks!
write more, plz! |
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