| "Pleasures of Business" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: kangel On: March 24, 2003 16:14 CST
Comment/Review:
*lemon* update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!! its great so far |
Reviewed By: Kangel On: March 24, 2003 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
good so far update soon |
Reviewed By: Inu-chan On: March 23, 2003 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story, i really enjoy reading it. i'm hoping the next chapter is coming soon. (i can't wait) |
Reviewed By: danaiguess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the fic!!!! i hate cliffies tho!!lol please update
soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its a conspirece desinded to keep me forever at this site...why must everyone left there stories in cliffangers...~_^ he he Keep up the good work can't wait to read what happens next. |
Reviewed By: sawdust On: March 10, 2003 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs some work, otherwise alright. |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh i like! i like a LOT!!! you have to keep on updating this fanfic! i love it! i wanna know what happens after they realize its... um... each other. lol.
Its really descriptive, and i love how its written. i wonder how Kagome will reach tho? Will she faint? cry? laugh? lol i wanna know!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: i hate cliffys On: March 09, 2003 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH!!!!!!! not again.you are evil.i love your story though it had a cliffy.plz plz plz finish the story i'm dieing to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written, and it's very descriptive. I pictured the story just the way you wrote it. Very Good. I would most definetely like to know what will happen next. |
Reviewed By: Bise B On: March 08, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! good job! keep the cappies coming |
Reviewed By: kagome3112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sware if any-one put's down this fanfic they are fucking crazie...lol.I really really really love this fan-fic it is Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo freaking guud...please update soon.E-mail me an let me know when it is updated (kagome3112@hotmail.com)
please update soon like mabey..tommorow!!!!!
~kagome3112 |
Reviewed By: NightWolf On: July 27, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fics. i have ever red and trust me i have read a lot. this one is in the top three. so congratulations. this fic is great and i'm going to tell my friends to read this they will like it too.
Thank You Very Much:)
NightWolf
(a.k.a. nicole) |
Reviewed By: NightWolf On: July 27, 2003 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fics. i have ever red and trust me i have read a lot. this one is in the top three. so congratulations. this fic is great and i'm going to tell my friends to read this they will like it too. I do hope you will continue on this fic. I ding to know what happends.
Thank You Very Much:)
NightWolf
(a.k.a. nicole) |
Reviewed By: ahhhhhhhhhhhhh On: March 27, 2003 09:18 CST
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keep putting chap. up its so good so far |
Reviewed By: WOW On: March 27, 2003 10:20 CST
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UPDATE SOON |
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