| "Say You Love Me" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: January 12, 2005 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad. Not your first story was it? Very enjoyable. I'm on here too under jhoney so if you like please check out some of my works.
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Reviewed By: YxY4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oww my back is starting to hurt from all the suspense oww it is actually hurting hmm anyway pretty good I like it though it needs more fluff! anyway now that your finished i cant really say that though next time try to include some fluff (I'm not flaming! I hate to flame people who flame are annoying in my oppion) anyway great story NEEDS FLUFF! I'm a big fluff fan so I love your story and I hope you write more in the future!
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Reviewed By: FairysGift On: June 03, 2003 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to get a dictionary quick!!! You can apologise as much as you want but your spelling is awful. sort it out! On the other hand your story is fantastic!!! I laughed so much when Yami shoved that b---h in the restaurant.Your lemon wasn't too bad either.Maybe you should consider writing a sequel? |
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have some things to say...
1. Tyson/Kai... duh!
2. it don't matter if i'm online send me it anyway!
3. I love the lemon!! |
Reviewed By: Kanatasha On: May 26, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic! yay lemony goodness! I choose Tyson/Kai for your coupling in your beyblade ficcy! Of course, you could do a three-some.....*grins idiotically* YUMMY! |
Reviewed By: rox On: May 26, 2003 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolies! Me likes! ^_^ Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 17:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
well to be honest, I hate being the last to see this kind of thing ya know? really....I loved the storry and you did a great job. Keep up the writting and srry about the spell check thing. ANd yes I can type bettethen this,but my keyboard isn't working right. |
Reviewed By: Marielle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay,this is a really good story!It has suspense on some parts,romance,Tea-Bashing,what more could you ask for?MORE TEA-BASHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Oops!Sorry about that!I just imagined her tossed into a volcano then it exploded and she landed in the ocean and a shark ate her and then he spat her back into the volcano!The circle of life for Tea...^.^ |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Guardians [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was beautiful *cries* I'm glad you loved my fic, I'm returning the favor for you ^_^ *gives her some chocolate*
Shady: Oh no, here she goes raunting on and on and on-
*hits Shady with a mallet* Silence fool!!
Shady: *rubs head* ow.
Blinx: You didn't have to hit him that hard, hikari.
well, get used to it cuz' it might not be Shady who gets hit.
Blinx: o.o!! Meep!! *hides under the couch* Don't let her get me!!! >. |
Reviewed By: MegamiKaiba On: July 10, 2003 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
And I thought I told my yami that I'd stop reading yaoi and lemon.
Gods that was a good fanfic! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 08, 2003 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww...fluffy goodness so sweet and always appericated! ^-^ Arigato! Yuugi & Yami are soooo kawaii! I'm glad Yuugi is okay now. ^_^ Keep going please!! I love this and want more! PLEASE! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Tjay Motou On: April 08, 2003 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!! LEMON!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW!!!! It's so cute! This story has my four favthings - Y/YY B/R S/J an TEA BASHING!!! |
Reviewed By: randomasdf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is such a CUTE story! I'm glad Yami and Yugi have FINALLY gottn together - the last scene was really, REALLY CUTE! Keep writing and update soon!
~Randomasdf~ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah! They know how the other feels now! I hope you post more soon! |
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