Reviewed By: wtf_crazigrl On: May 08, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
jen north,
alright, if you want to know the truth it was good. "ok" good, but not "that was so awsome" good. it should have more detial and link should converse more with the people. i mean if it has been awhile since he has seen them i think they would want to talk a lot more than they do. also, if you went back and added more detail, that would put a clear picture in someone's mind, it would make it more captivating to the readers. but, besides all that, i believe you have a very good idea, and i hope to read more.
sincerely,
me, who has never
met "jen north,"
ever, in my life,
wtf_crazigrl |
