| "Splinters of a Song" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Yushu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 10:06 CDT
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Just noticed the posting dates on these chapters. I'm so very glad you're finishing it! Bounced ahead for author's notes to see what the deal was on the dates, and all I can say is...for my money, it's always best to remain true to the vision of your story. It came out of where your understanding was at the time and in that instant, like some "alternate universe" your story flaked off from Maki Murakami's. No fan fiction is anything other than AU, for that reason. This piece very definitely has its own character and integrity, and you s/b very proud of it.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Yushu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 10:01 CDT
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Track One: There are so many things to like about this story. One of my hopes when I began reading Gravi-fic was to find someone who had examined Ryu in depth . . . And I think you're doing a magnificent job. The creative mind is the original virtual reality, and you're taking us on a fascinating journey. I love the way he translates the world into sound. "No matter how high up, there was always a little bit of noise." Great opening line. "All he needed was a little rhythm..." any dancer or singer can relate to that. And possibly my favorite line of all which has nothing to do with sound and everything to do with one type of creative genius..."Everyone had one but mine was ..." Well, you know which line I mean, but no one should read it out of context. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Sumeragi Ryuichi On: June 22, 2003 04:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really really REALLY good! Very interesting way of writing and it got me hooked on very quickly ... Ganbate! |
Reviewed By: Minq On: June 05, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic is really great! You have wonderful style of writing, and the pairing is really interesting. ^^ I mean, I really like Touma/Ryu, they're so... hm... I don't know how to say it, but i think you know what I mean. And lemon was really good! I'll add this one to my list of fanfics that I'm checking often ^^ You're great author! |
Reviewed By: koei On: May 03, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
neeeeeeeeeee~
you just pictured ryuu-chan, like i imagined him.. (just can't believe all the, he's so innocent and he's stuck in his childhood bullshit... ^__^), touma/ryuu is usually a plus and your style of writing is absolutely fantastic!!
na, i don't think the lemon was bad written, i did like it very much ^_______^
anyways, i hope to see much muuuuch more from you ^______________________^
(n hopefull soon ^_~)
greetings -.-koei-.- |
Reviewed By: T On: April 02, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic!!!! Please keep going. I want to see what will happen next. I will be looking for follow up chapters.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Yana On: March 09, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this story eventhough it was uh, not yet finished and still hanging. i hope to see more ryuichixtohma in the future |
