| "Dark Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Amon22 On: March 26, 2005 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story. Definitely not enough VegetaxGohan fics out there. One of the best, if not the best, one-shot/PWP's I've ever read. A sequel would be nice.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmfao! omg that was GREAT! i tend to stay away from yaoi dbz fics that are anything OTHER than Vegeta+Goku but i was uber bored and read almost all the V+G(K) fics here on MM.org so i clicked yours and dude it was kickass! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Laughing Idiot On: October 07, 2004 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a pretty good story I especially liked the way you wrotte it in Vegeta's preson. However I really think you should write a sequel involving Vegeta and a very pissed-off Goku.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. There were only a few grammar/spelling errors present, but that would be my only gripe, aside from this being a one shot. There is so much room to grow here. I just might have to slap you if you refuse to do a follow up. ^_^ Thanks for the fun PWP! |
Reviewed By: Blue Siren On: March 13, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one shot. Hopefully you do a follow up on this |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 04:46 CST
Comment/Review:
heh! That was cute!
You should write a follow up of this! I wanna know what goku things about the whole bonding thing!! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: March 11, 2003 21:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this pairing as well. Nice fic. Really like the end with Vegeta wondering if Goku is laughing or planning to kill him. |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: March 09, 2003 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so right! There are so little Gohan/Vegeta ficcies out there... and that is a damn shame *nods*
I really enjoyed this story ^_^ So I'd like to thank you for posting it ^_^
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Midnight Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work |
