| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trina On: August 07, 2003 19:20 CDT
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U know I didn't know it was a yaoi fic untill I read the reviews I'm so glad I did. You have a great story I saw this story all the time and I don't like fic with Hiei not with kurama so I didn't read it I'm so glad I didn't you have to many clifhangers and I would always want more then I whould feel depresseed when there wasn't a update. Great fic best I read in a wile defenetely in my top five yyh fics. |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is pretty easy to follow, I enjoy reading a fic where I don't have to figure out where one scene starts and ends.
The spelling and grammer is very nice, almost no mistakes. Just a couple.
This isn't a completely original fiction, I've read others that have similar concepts, but this one is written in a rather creative way. I sure didn't see the Fey Princess falling in love with Dante.
This fiction's a rather enjoyable fic to read, I've already read it a couple times, although the multiple times is mainly in concern that I've read almost all that I can find.
Overall, I think it's a very well written fiction. I hope you'll continue.
P.S. Could you do one with Hiei as uke? |
Reviewed By: Francie On: August 04, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO, i think it was a good chapter! Finally, hiei ofund out about love. Awww! Please, do keep it going! Thanks! |
Reviewed By: jordan On: July 28, 2003 01:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is my favorite story!!!!!!! i just love how hiei shows that even he has a vulnerable side. though he doesn't show very often, does he. still... keep writing. i check almost every day just to see if you've written a new chapter.
jordan |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 22:01 CDT
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Oh...my...gosh. Wow. I love this fic. It's just soo...beautiful!!! *sobs* You did an awesome job on the lemon in chapter 11. Very tasteful...can't wait for the next update!
-Jennifred |
Reviewed By: anime goth On: July 24, 2003 03:00 CDT
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this is simply the best fic ever. the whole thing is perfect plus im lisning to christina aguileras
beautiful so that might have an effect on it.so
update or ill go kikyo on you ass.
ps to any and all who dont know who the hell kikyo is shes a dead bitch who is now a goust bitch and oh fuck just what inuyasha ... oh ya i forgot those bastards at cartoon network cancled it *randum cursing* |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 00:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
*completely melts*
That was... SO... damnit, I can't even find words to express to you how much I enjoyed that chapter. Even if you had completely cut out the lemon scene, I would have adored it!
Kurama's memories, Kekket (i think that's how you spell it?) and Dante FINALLY coming together, and everyone's fave demons coming to terms with their emotions and expressing something deeper, that us lowly mortals could never even touch.
You, my dear, are a complete GENIUS.
Though, I'm worried... I have a feeling sad things are to come :(
Either way, I know I'm going to love the end of this story. Sometimes happiness is bested by tragedy... You do what feels right.
I'll be back soon! Promise! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you. You posted a new chapter.
I loved it, it had all the tenderness and ackwardness that was fitting. It was perhaps the first unselfish thing Kurama did setting Hiei free back in the Makai.
I enjoyed Dante and Kekket finally getting together as well.
Now if the story can just reach it's conclusion without a beloved character death.
I truly love this story. I like the way you write Youko Kurama, I like Kurama/Shuuichi, and Yuusuke and Kuwabara. You have a deft feel for Hiei too. I've read and re-read several times. Thank you for updating, I wait eagerly for future chapters. |
Reviewed By: Bolivianprob [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEAUTIFUL! ~sob sob~ I love it! Not only did kurama and hiei finally make love, They confessed their feelings! Brava, brava! You inspire me sirencirce! Keep writing, you have real talent! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose On: July 14, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! This fic sounds so great! Please please write more! I can't wait until u finish it. Oh I and can't wait foranother lemon.... please? ^_^ I love the Mt. Hiei and Mt. Kurama stuff (to any1 that's wondering, there are for a fact 2 mountains in Japan named Kurama and Hiei) Even though this isn't a humor based fic, I keep finding my self laughing at Hiei's comments. Again, this fic sounds great! Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: July 14, 2003 10:47 CDT
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o yea, & b4 i 4get, i really like Hiei's attitude (his sense of humor) |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: July 14, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is 1 of da BEST stories i've eva read!!!!! i really like da way u hab kurama's view of da past. juz c dis story 2day & finish readin it 2. 2 bad i wasn't able 2 vote 4 kurama & hiei pairin *sob sob*
o well, must b HAPPY & da only way 2 do dat is if u...
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
oops, ritin a little 2 much & is gettin hungry
P.S. u betta update soon or face da wrath of hiei & kurama!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bianka-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all I found this fanfic incredibly enjoyable. It contained a plot that I have not yet seen and the way it was written was not too ornamental but it was also not bland. It was a perfect meld of what was needed and what was wanted. I am incredibly impressed at your style of writing and I hope that you continue to do so. |
Reviewed By: hm... On: July 08, 2003 18:43 CDT
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They say something about Mt. Hiei in Kenshin so I guess its not a coincidence.
Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(ok. i think that's enough exclamation marks.) |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 08:25 CDT
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Hmm... I re read the story again and I realized the irony in chapter nine when Yusuke is sitting in history class. I had thought you were just making up the whole thing with Hiei being a mountain, but Mount. Hiei DOES exist! I'm not so sure about Kurama though. Anyway, just wanted to say that, and upsate soon, PLEASE! |
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