| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Title: please finish
Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U gotta finish the story. this is really good. we still dont know what is the real purpose to taking kekt. what happens to keket and dante now? as with Kurama, what about kurama and hiei? how to they find fortinbras? such a good story, please finish!
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Reviewed By: Na (draechaeli) On: July 13, 2005 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, great story! you have to update soon please! I really wanna know what Kurama will do/say in the morning. ~Na
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Reviewed By: Sade On: May 30, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much, I've read it mad times, I know I have no life, but that's how good it is... is that seriously how you're going to end it!? come on, I'm dying to see the end. The lemon was awesome, I mean totally wicked, but I'd love to see how it actually ends, come on girl, finish it... plleeeeaasssseee!!!
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Reviewed By: Shirukaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 00:27 CDT
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Woah, all I can say is woah.. This is a GREAT fanfic!! It's VERY well written and has such a great plot! I truly enjoyed this fanfic so much. I'm really looking forwards to seeing more chapters, and I can only hope that you will add more. I'm really anxious to see what that snake dude has in store for Kekket! Not only did you make up awesome characters and an awesome race, but you keep every character true to their character. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 13:30 CST
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um, hopefully you haven't forgotten about this one. It's too good to just leave it to gather dust on the net!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:50 CDT
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OMG this is a great story i love it you have got to update it really really really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ not signed in On: July 08, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I honestly hope that you manage to get back to this one! It's a wonderful story that when read you can actually SEE what's going on. That is an art. You portray your characters well and your use of settings is great! Please continue this one ... !! I know that stupid snake thing has something in store for the team (well, more so for Kekket ... he's going to try and force a marriage isn't he?) Should be interesting to see who manages to "go off" more ... Hiei or Dante! Well, that's my imagination going into high gear ^_~ I'd love to see where you're taking this!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii34 On: March 27, 2004 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole story was great but to be honest dont end at chapter11 cause some writers never finish their stories
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Reviewed By: Aiakia On: December 30, 2003 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, let me just say this: It is 4:50 in the morning. Am I am completely wide awake after reading chapter 11. Don't be so hard on yourself!!! It was a great chapter and was done in very good taste. I'm usually not bif on yaoi fan fictions, but I'm absolutely in love with your's. I love it how you keep Hiei so true to his character...and not just him, but everyone else too. I cannot wait to read another chapter. Update soon. ^_^
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Title: ...Hiei... seme!?
Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
[is shocked] ...Hiei... seme!? [shrugs] Oh well, I don't mind either way... but I'm glad how you portrayed it. ^_______^
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Reviewed By: AndyKoji On: October 22, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found this fiction and I finished reading it and it was great. You should write more stories like this because it really showed the characters like they would act. Very nicely done.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 01:58 CDT
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OH. MY. GOD. THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *evil grin* that last bit is still fresh in my mind *contented sigh* nicely writen, and Hiei was well in character in my opinion, you didn't change him in anyway, but just fit a past with him. i like that, the way you made it seem like it could actually come out of the anime was really ingenious ^-^ haven't read one of those in a while ^_-
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: WITCHWERE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great concept. There are so many H/K ramances out there that are well unrealistic. You have kept the characters real and allow them to have flaws. Beautiful! Ch 11 was very good you should not be so hard on yourself!
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Reviewed By: darkdragoon On: August 24, 2003 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
H/K definately |
Reviewed By: TheBlackRose On: August 08, 2003 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur fic is awesome!! I love the storyline! I'm dying to read more so keep writing!! Update soon!!! |
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