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| "Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow.. very impressive. Pretty hard for a first time, but definetely a very interesting PWP. Personally I'm not so much into the SM section, but it was done very well. Would love to see a sequel! | Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:37 CST
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Heh heh, I understand about Budokai. I myself went on a binge not too long ago, final flashing every unfortunate soul that agreed to play against me. Hahaha! Uh anyway, I shall actually review your story now. That is the point after all. :)
Damn woman, I must say that your portrayal of Goku was ingenius! I always knew he had to be a closet perv (no pun intended) with the psycho wife he has! I could definitely see Vegeta being intrigued by the big goof actually behaving like the Saiyajin he is. Mmm, I liked it. Starts drooling thinking about leather clad Saiyajins chained to the bed... | Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I STILL find it INCREDIBLY hard to believe that this is your very first yaoi fic!! It's EXTREMELY well written, VERY original...sure there are GxV bondage fics floating around, but the setting itself of the BDSM bar is totally new to me!...LOVED the closet scene!! YUMMY!! I'll admit that I'm not the biggest Goku fan in the world, but DAMN I love your characterization of him!! It's exciting seeing him as feral and passionate, not the happy-go-lucky fool that he usually is portrayed as, but a sexual being. Again, I must say YUMMY!! EXCELLENT first foray into the world of Yaoiness!! And I know your next fic, the Truten ~winks~ will be just as delicious!! THANK YOU for your note to me at the end!! ^.^ You made my day!! | Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFFFFFFUCCKINGGGGGGOD!
THAT WAS ummmmm ok I dont have the words GOKU U FUCKINGGG!LOW CLASSS BAKA I HATEUUUU!!!! HOW DAREEEUUUUUUUU!!!!
Ahem Im calm YUp ! thats me ! Well I dont like yaois and I hate my prince to be dominated by that low class bich but ok 2 thumbs up!
Geta u ok baby?
+no onna I I --- +
NOW U SEE WHAT U HAVE DONE!!!!! Dont worry baby come here let me heal u baby u want so me hot sex Vege baby? HUH?
+yes+
Ok lets go!
Dont do that again ok!
*PSSSS! Hey this is NSBVEGETA well..... her sycho self and let me just say UUU ROCKKKKKKKKK!!!!! YEAH BABYYY OH BEHAVEEE!! GGRRRRRRR!!!!! I loved it girl!! GIVE ME MORE!!! , anyways my normalself is fucking the Geta man and I canttt miss that!*
*HEY BEFORE I FORGET WHEN ITS THE NEXT LEMON GOING TO BE HUH >:D*
and HEY UPDATE Pantera tigris tigris and For godsake PLEASE I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOREVERR!!!!
Oh Vegeta yes!!!
*LATER>:D* | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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