| "Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was some good shit. I give you that. I enjoyed it since I was peaked by the warning.
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Title: geT-A-lIfe U FAg!
Reviewed By: BOne DICks On: March 12, 2005 23:26 CST
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This shit was sick and demented,why don't you do the human race a favor and just go die, Fuckin Sicko
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Reviewed By: Flamingolo On: July 13, 2004 00:03 CDT
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This is such a vibrant ficcie! Have I told you lately that I love your style? Because I do. Love the way the Vegetta on Goku action was written; so disturbingly real! I mean, there would *have* to be some pent up aggression in their interaction let loose some way, right? Right! The scene in the closet was so dark and amazing, way to conjure up all kinds of images, as well as reader reactions. And Goku taking total control, brilliantly written, freaking powerful atmosphere. I can hardly believe this is your first yaoi lemon...my god! Un-fu&*ing believable, you super, twisted genius, you! *madly wild glompies*
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Reviewed By: DarkLight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here is, yet again, another totally amazing story. It was awesome for your first yaoi. The thought of Goku in tight leather pants...*smiles mischevioulsy*
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 14:56 CDT
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This is the first DBZ fanfic I ready. I enjoyed it thoroughly, but then I like your other work.
Thanks for openning up a new fandom for me.
Of course I don't really need another yaoi obession, but it is nice to have a new one. |
Reviewed By: Dave On: June 21, 2003 21:07 CDT
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Very well done. I'm new to fanfic so it was nice to read something good from the get-go. Keep up the good work, you're very talented. |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 23, 2003 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should be very proud of your first yaoi. Its excellent, and yummy. Having Goku so bloodthirsty in sex is...delicious to say the least. I think I like him uke for the general though, but it's nice to have a change ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Kris On: March 17, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first one i have read...so i dont know if the ratings mean that much.....reason why they are so high is i got a lil aroused by it n i didnt think i could cuz its two guyz so yea good job there hun |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A'nore: Black leather on Goku! mm mm good...
L'orn: This story makes me wish to be a coat hanger in Goku's closet! Yeah! Where are those Dragonballs?
A'nore: That's original. You're really strange sis...
L'orn: I love strange. And tight leather and whips and little bloody daggers and bondage and a certain Saiyan Prince strapped to the bed naked!
A'nore: So we both agree, good bondage yaoi between our two favorite Saiyan toys, um I mean boys! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all that i can say, i was glued to the screen and nothing more bothered me either well writtin and welldone. Great frist time fic loved it and as always kepp up the good work |
Reviewed By: otaku On: March 10, 2003 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I can't believe this is your firs yaoi fic! Note to Vegeta: don't take it like this prince,you're born to be uke!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 23:30 CST
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::whimpers, crossing legs:: Ooooh... oooh.... ooh... ooh... I -- that's your FIRST???? You lie!
Only adjustment I would make is, perhaps, use of lube. All pain is not created equal... & un-lubricated anal sex is awfully, awfully painful! In th' bad way. Yeah.
But otherwise.... puuuurrrrrfect.
::wiggles:: |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands in shock* Wow! I can't believe this is your first yaoi! It was too awesome for word....I loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shasta: *eyes go VERY wide* By the seven Dragonballs of Namek, i feel i am scarred for life... Vegeta and Katarokk..... doing ...THAT.... *curls up into a ball, shaking uncontrolably* Think of happy things, Shasta... purple rain... marijanna.... Trunks in his underwear.... Trunks in bondage gear....Trunks butt naked.... *mutters to self*
LMAO! T'was a very good yaoi ficlet, me dear! :p
Even though the thought of Veggie and *gag* Katarokk doing THAT disturbs me to my very core, it was well written and the masterbation scene was believable! *gives a thumbs up*
Trunks: *curls up into a ball, twitching* The horror... THE HORROR!!!
Shasta: Excuse me... my muse has been scarred for life.. ^_^ ' *drags Trunks off for some 'sexual healin' * |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurai: (eyes glued to the screen, drooling)
Yami Gemi: (Passed out on the floor, wings twitching)
^_^ Damn. For your first yaoi, that was excellent. Hell, for ANY yaoi that was excellent.
Hope there's more soon!
Later Dayz & TAnx!!
Gemi, Y.Gemi and Kurai |
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