Reviewed By: Neko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style:: As always your style flows, and is very elegant.
Spelling and grammar:: Is naturally perfect.
Originality:: Come on, it may be one of the largest yaoi couplings from Dragonball, however, it's coming from a Bulma/Vegeta shipper, ^_~ and I really haven't seen this point of thinking before.
Enjoyment:: It's beautiful to read, and almost complicated if you don't understand this type of thinking, or Vegeta in general. Not to mention, it stays true to Vegeta's character, which makes any fic enjoyable.
Overall:: Maybe I'm just being biased, considering I love all of your stuff, anyway, and I have read this before, but I needed to rate it and comment to it. I wish everyone here could understand the symbolism behind this being the only thing you left here. And just to let you know, things have really changed around here. ::sigh:: But I don't blame you one bit for leaving. I don't like it too much here either. |
