| "False Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really, Truly, Wholeheartedly, Hope That You Continue This Story! Its Great! - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: Kail Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good. The only problems I see is 1)The prologue implies that Shinji dies or goes insane. 2) The Rei/Asuka/Shinji thing(Not that way... Get your mind out of the gutter). I like stories like that, but it cant happen if Asuka thinks Shinji is dead or something. Hmmm... Maybe it will get better, if the writer ever adds more chapters.
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Reviewed By: djb21212 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I've seen both "The Matrix" and "Evangelion" and this was a nice twist on both. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Hope you update soon! |
