| "Surviving Together: A New Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
I really love your fics, but I'm sorry to ask how trunks gets a tail when you specifically pointed out that he DID NOT HAVE ONE?
You wrote:
“Don’t lie to me, woman.” Vegeta hissed as he broke away from her. “The boy can’t be mine. He’s too young. He has no tail. And you weren’t fertile when we lay together. He can’t be mine!”
“Vegeta, I would not lie to you.” Bulma tried to explain. “Trunks is not too young, he’s almost ten. Yes, he doesn’t have a tail now, but that’s because I had it cut off after his birth. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 17:38 PST
Comment/Review:
THAT FUUUCKKERRRR!!!!! I hate Durka andCOOLER!!!!
Poor BULMA!!!! God what the hell is gpoing to happen now!!!!!!
UPDATEEE SOOONNNN!!!!!
PLEASEEEEE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: eljoebla On: April 05, 2003 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice update soon! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy Shit!! Durka must die! and I really liked him, too! Errr, cant' wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 16:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Im telling uuu!!!! I was right!!!!!!!!!!! WEEEPEEE!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!
Yes I KNEW THAT BLUE BITCH WAS Trouble DURKA I HATE UUUU!!!!! I ALWAYS DID BITCHH!!!
Now what is going to happen!! AHHHH! IM DYING
U are evil very very evil !! CLIIIIIIFYYYYYY!!!!!
GGRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOOONNN!
Later~ |
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I just wanna say thank you, for being such an excellent writer, I loved all of you fics, and I'm still lovin' 'em even after reading them again, and again and again....:D
You're a great artist!
This was my tribute to the legendary LavenderGoddessV...All ye who haven't read her fics yet, shame on you!
~Blue Dragon~ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 18:55 PST
Comment/Review:
The vegeta, Trunks, Bulma moment was sweet I cried!!!
Im telling you Cooler is just like FreeZA! A Punkaasss Bitch Roach that doesnt go the FUCK AWAY!
I knew that he had to come back but hell why now!!!
Shit !
As for the spy Im betting my mony on a certain captain I hate him so I have a feeling that he's been playing everyone.
Update soon I wanna know if my suspitions are right!
Later! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh hell! Just when things were looking up. Oh well, I knew Cooler had to make a reappearace, although I am surprised about the spy. Can't wait to see who that is. |
Reviewed By: me On: April 02, 2003 12:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!!! i thought you'd never spit it out!!!!
it be getttin good!!!!
i'm out |
Reviewed By: Bise B On: April 01, 2003 21:27 PST
Comment/Review:
YEA! YEA! YEA! bulma and vegeta met! im so happy.!! thanx |
Reviewed By: bEaUtIfULaNgEL21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 20:34 PST
Comment/Review:
omg!!! finally!!!!!!! whew!! wow great chap.... wats gunna happen now???? huh???? i wonder how trunks will react.. hahah well update SOON!!! payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 19:58 PST
Comment/Review:
*doing the happy dance, doing the happy dance*
Ha ha ha! That was GREAT!!
*takes several deep breaths to get rid of my psychotically hyper state*
That's better. Anyway, awesome chapter. Can't wait to see what Trunks is going to say about everything! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:13 PST
Comment/Review:
Good GGOODDD!!!!!!! THANKKKKK KAMIIIII!!! Finally Do u know how much I waited it seems like years but u did it !!! YAY!!!!! SO HAPPY NOWW!! I want to huggg uu!
But Please Update soon ok!!!! Cause Im dying to know what happens next!
Later
and by the way cool short lemon but I want more
what can u expect Im a hentai! |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: March 31, 2003 16:31 PST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! vegeta knows!!!! he knows itz him!!!!# wats he gunna do???? will bulma know vegeta is right behind her??? omg!!! update SOON!!!! well payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: March 31, 2003 16:30 PST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! vegeta knows!!!! he knows itz him!!!!# wats he gunna do???? will bulma know vegeta is right behind her??? omg!!! update SOON!!!! well payce outZ~! |
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